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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved this one: well written, good buildup, funny and sexy!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hnnn..hot...^^
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! *___*
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an AMAZING story. I wanna go to a love hotel. ^^;;;
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, a whole year later and you still get a review. xD Hehe, cute story. ^___^ Loved it, especially the last portion of it. :3 Good job~
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute ^^. I loved it so much. You have an exellent writing style, I wish it wasn't over :(.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lunamaria - i\'ve seen gay porn with this position. it seems to work fine irl. gay sex is not that limited.
as for the water thing, if i wrote the mechanics down to the smallest detail it would ruin the atmosphere, trust me they can do it in water too :o)
thanks anyway for the review ^__^
as for the water thing, if i wrote the mechanics down to the smallest detail it would ruin the atmosphere, trust me they can do it in water too :o)
thanks anyway for the review ^__^
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How did I ever miss this? Hehehe...naughty Fuji! Very nice job...hope to see more of your fics in the future! :D
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lmao!! glow-in-the-dark condoms >_< thats awesome~
Your fanfic was rich and very detailed^^
Your fanfic was rich and very detailed^^
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty well-done fic - and actually, someone who DOES research! Wheee... makes me one happy TezuFuji fan.
Some things I should point out, however:
* The first sex scene felt at times too much like vaginal sex, due to the position they were in. You may want to check that.
* Uhm, after that scene, did Tezuka ever take out the condom Fuji put on his cock? Also, if they were in a bath tub, then the oil Fuji used as lube would be washed away by the water and OMFGOUCH. Anal sex without lube is *painful*.
* Some descriptions like \"feel Fuji\'s insides contracting\" or \"leaking organ\" tend to squick more than arouse. :o
But even then, it was a VERY enjoyable read. I\'m looking forward for more. :)
-- Maria
Some things I should point out, however:
* The first sex scene felt at times too much like vaginal sex, due to the position they were in. You may want to check that.
* Uhm, after that scene, did Tezuka ever take out the condom Fuji put on his cock? Also, if they were in a bath tub, then the oil Fuji used as lube would be washed away by the water and OMFGOUCH. Anal sex without lube is *painful*.
* Some descriptions like \"feel Fuji\'s insides contracting\" or \"leaking organ\" tend to squick more than arouse. :o
But even then, it was a VERY enjoyable read. I\'m looking forward for more. :)
-- Maria