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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I generally don\'t comment on this, but the fact that you used Marvell\'s \"To His Coy Mistress\" amused me so greatly that I felt compelled to express my er...amusement. The poem fits so well with the nature of the AxI tension. She could never bring herself to be with him (and even if she did, she\'d probably hate herself for doing so) because he is a vampire, the thing she has been sworn to destroy. Yet he is patient, taking a long-lived life as a lesson in wearing down his quarry. Bravo.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic. Written very well, love the poetry. I can picture it perfectly, and that fact alone makes it better. Again i say great job...keep it up.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now we\'ll be thinking in the next scene, when Alucard come back!
Like your other fanfics, I love it! The day you\'ll stop writing AxI I\'ll regret it very much.
Well...as I said to you, I consider myself one of your most loyal fans!
Like your other fanfics, I love it! The day you\'ll stop writing AxI I\'ll regret it very much.
Well...as I said to you, I consider myself one of your most loyal fans!
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHOA ANOTHER GOOD WRITTEN FANFICTION STORY ABOUT ALUCARD AND ME Lol. That is exactly what would Alucard will write to me! Is this going to become a one-shot fanfiction letter story??? PLEASE no way...... I just hope YOU update this story and make the next chapter interesting! I am a HUGE Fan of the AxI couple. They just go well together anyway. lol Everyday I\'m practicing to be like Integral since she is a virgin of steel and so on. HOPE U UPDATE..... AW COME ON PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! IF ANYONE ELSE DIDNT REVIEW THIS STORY..... I\'LL MAKE THEM DO IT AND READ IT for u!
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, you probably are aware of the fact that IntegraxAlucard isn\'t really my favored pairing.
Alucard is in his very own way an interesting character and I like Integra a lot,
I just don\'t carl thl that much about romance between the two.
That aside, this is as well written as your other works and I like how you worked the poem into the story.
It might have been interesting to see Integra\'s reactions to the letter
but I\'m not sure if and how exactly that would have worked out...^^\'
Alucard is in his very own way an interesting character and I like Integra a lot,
I just don\'t carl thl that much about romance between the two.
That aside, this is as well written as your other works and I like how you worked the poem into the story.
It might have been interesting to see Integra\'s reactions to the letter
but I\'m not sure if and how exactly that would have worked out...^^\'
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was absolutly amazing. Great writing great work!