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schedule
March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
as cute and romantic as that was, it was a little hard to read certain words(and i don't mean the japanese)and also it was quite corny to say the least!
schedule
November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly amazing writing. I have read alot of storieson this site and yours is the first that truly impressed me. You captrued their characters perfectly. Awesome job.
schedule
May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I had read this story before but I didn\'t review it, SORRY!! T-T Now on with the review, I liked it, it was good. A bit short and undetailed but good. I\'m sure that if you keep writing you\'ll make even better fanfics. I liked this fic because it\'s not just about sex, but also about feelings. Looking foward to the next one. Keep up the good work.