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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story!!! my favorite Hikaru no go story by far!!!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, seriously this has some of the best characterization I've seen, it seems like just a step away from the manga, an epilogue, if you will. Defintely one of the best HikaGo fics I've read.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so fluffy! ^^ I loved it! This is the kind of lemon that makes you smile happily when you're done reading it. *claps*
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful story. I'll probably end up reading it at least 3 more times before the week's over. Thank you!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was cool. Very in character. One of the most in character fics I\'ve ever seen. Great job. Really amazing.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so floaty. Thank you!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn, i gotta say, one of THE BEST hng fics out there.... and especially of all the one shots i\'ve read, you way outrank them all with this one i think... i love your writing, the bits of humor you threw in that were perfect for the situation, exactly something i could see the boys doing... and you have their chars down perfect! esp all the initial clumsiness, awkwardness, shyness, etc etc... anyway, so much i loved about this, but too tired to write a novel lol, so, a couple quotes i quoted to my girl houseki when i was raving about this to her:
Hikaru was about to speak again, but paused. He studied the young man kneeling on the floor in front of him. It was very strange to see him from above. It looked like his hair was parted with a ruler.
He decided that it probably was.
that, i was totally rofling!! heheheh and then of course:
Akira swallowed thickly. There was no wind left in him, and his vision was bleary. Dazed and out of breath, he tried speaking.
\"Can you see the phone? I mean, the fridge? I mean the clock.\"
i just kept rereading that cuz it was too great, and every time i think i laughed more :p
anyway, the only complaints i could possibly have were typos, (which sometimes i think aff\'s server is responsible for cuz they not only get pretty crazy, but are similar in many fics with how fucked up the typos are...) and that i really loved the slow pace, the gradual seamless transitions from one situation to the next, it all worked beautifully and i loved that you could start with hikaru hurting his foot like that and turn it into a chance for akira to get lost in caressing him... that was sweet dude... but once they were in the bedroom it was like \"let\'s go!\" but... ah well, in the heat of the moment it really can go that way too, so i\'m still happy see? ^_________________^ anyway, my last complaint: you don\'t have anymore hng fics!!! you have a great amount of fics, and if they\'re all as well written and enjoyable as this was, i\'m sure they\'re awesome, but damn the only other anime in your fics i know enough about are naruto and bleach *cries* and hikago fics are severly lacking, both in quantity and quality for the most part.... please write more!! whether it be adding to this, or something new altogether, please write more hng!! *ahem* ok, i\'m done lol
~lg
Hikaru was about to speak again, but paused. He studied the young man kneeling on the floor in front of him. It was very strange to see him from above. It looked like his hair was parted with a ruler.
He decided that it probably was.
that, i was totally rofling!! heheheh and then of course:
Akira swallowed thickly. There was no wind left in him, and his vision was bleary. Dazed and out of breath, he tried speaking.
\"Can you see the phone? I mean, the fridge? I mean the clock.\"
i just kept rereading that cuz it was too great, and every time i think i laughed more :p
anyway, the only complaints i could possibly have were typos, (which sometimes i think aff\'s server is responsible for cuz they not only get pretty crazy, but are similar in many fics with how fucked up the typos are...) and that i really loved the slow pace, the gradual seamless transitions from one situation to the next, it all worked beautifully and i loved that you could start with hikaru hurting his foot like that and turn it into a chance for akira to get lost in caressing him... that was sweet dude... but once they were in the bedroom it was like \"let\'s go!\" but... ah well, in the heat of the moment it really can go that way too, so i\'m still happy see? ^_________________^ anyway, my last complaint: you don\'t have anymore hng fics!!! you have a great amount of fics, and if they\'re all as well written and enjoyable as this was, i\'m sure they\'re awesome, but damn the only other anime in your fics i know enough about are naruto and bleach *cries* and hikago fics are severly lacking, both in quantity and quality for the most part.... please write more!! whether it be adding to this, or something new altogether, please write more hng!! *ahem* ok, i\'m done lol
~lg
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^-^.^,^.^-^^.^-^.^ :))))) <3~
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Luv, rebe
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Luv, rebe
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah Hikaru really is a fast mover and just seems to non-chalant. I think such an attitude would hurt Akira\'s feelings.
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell..............wow........I mean that wow. This has got to be one of the best written yaoi sex scenes I have ever read. I think I\'m blushing this was so sweet and yet full of honest desire.