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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! Thank you! This story was wonderful. Your writing is simply delicious and the sex scene left me slightly breathless. I loved it. <3
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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One of the best fanfics I have ever read, definitely now one of my all time favorites. I love your style of writing, and the way those two just fit together, and come together in this story is really well done. It feels very natural and sweet, while at the same time managing being hot and sexy XD Don\'t have much to say other than that, but incredibly well done, I love it! Please keep writing!
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, loved it, LOVED IT! They were so in-character it was amazing! Sequel, please? *puppy eyes*
~Shez
http://boy-toys.totallychibi.com <--- Shameless plugging for a friend\'s shounen-ai archive. ^^;
~Shez
http://boy-toys.totallychibi.com <--- Shameless plugging for a friend\'s shounen-ai archive. ^^;
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved it. It was just great. I loved the uncertainly/unsureness that they had. The tentativeness of it all was refreshing and it made it believeable as well. Also, that was definitely a unique way to get them started. Heh. I must say, I picked a well-written story to be my first Hikago fanfiction.
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I have to say this! YOU are one of the greatest fiction writer I have ever seen (or read...mmmm). Your stories are perfect, I have nothing to argue about. ''Gravity'', as expected, is no exeption. Whaaaaa... I feel like a little highschool girl(I'm actually a 26 years old art teacher!). Sorry about all the squeeling, coudn't restrain myself ;)
Anyways, thanks again for this beautiful story.
Anyways, thanks again for this beautiful story.
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm... what to say.... kinda odd way of gng tng them together, hurting hikaru like that. but i must say, the sex scene was great.
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s definitely the first time I saw a first time fic starting off when someone getting their foot patched up. XD
It was pretty well written. I liked it.
=^_^=
MEOW!
It was pretty well written. I liked it.
=^_^=
MEOW!
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June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. I guess it\'s realistic in the sense that they would react towards each other in this way after knowing and being around one anther for so long. But I have to admit, I don\'t think it ever occured to ANYOo uso use Neosporin as lube. Forgive me, but that one was just a little too much. ^^;
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the little lists of things they notice about eachother. They\'re funny and they show so well how close they\'ve gotten. The little bits of humor through this whole thing are just wonderful. And how just cause they\'re meant to be together or whatever doesn\'t mean they know exactly what they\'re doing. Too often you see that! As if all the cute awkwardness were less yummy!
Besides all the things that made me squeal and just made this fun to read, you seem like an awfully good writer. I don\'t really know how to say how since I\'m certainly not one... That seems to deter both the figuring out what it is you\'re doing so right and in the telling... I dunno. Er. There was nothing awkward about the dialogue or how you phrased anything. It all worked perfectly. The mood of it all came out in every sentence. Er. *feels stupid*
If I try and nitpick, just cause I feels silly sometimes to not have anything more than praise to say, I was a little surprised at Hikaru being sofidefident later on. Well, maybe it wasn\'t the confidence that surprised me but how easy-going he got after a while. He is like that sometimes, but this is a situation I\'d have not thought him to act that way in... Though it *does* make Touya look all the more cute. Maybe it\'s just me being obsessed with how adorable they are fumbling around. Also, the ending felt a little fast compared to the rest. Lots of these stories end like that without being a problem, but this one just took things so *wonderfully* nice and slow that I kind of expected it to be a little... er... slower. Indeed.
But thank you so much for such a wonderfully story! This has got to be one of the best HikaGo stories I\'ve read. And I\'ve read far too many. I don\'t usually review so much cause anything I can think to say always seems so vague, but nice writing like this deserves feedback, and the stuff on this site doesn\'t seem to get so much, and that d and an awful shame. Have you posted it anywhere else, cause it just plain deserves to be read, too. I\'m sure the nice people at the hikagoyaoi board would love you forever and ever if you poseted it there. I really think this is one of the best!
Besides all the things that made me squeal and just made this fun to read, you seem like an awfully good writer. I don\'t really know how to say how since I\'m certainly not one... That seems to deter both the figuring out what it is you\'re doing so right and in the telling... I dunno. Er. There was nothing awkward about the dialogue or how you phrased anything. It all worked perfectly. The mood of it all came out in every sentence. Er. *feels stupid*
If I try and nitpick, just cause I feels silly sometimes to not have anything more than praise to say, I was a little surprised at Hikaru being sofidefident later on. Well, maybe it wasn\'t the confidence that surprised me but how easy-going he got after a while. He is like that sometimes, but this is a situation I\'d have not thought him to act that way in... Though it *does* make Touya look all the more cute. Maybe it\'s just me being obsessed with how adorable they are fumbling around. Also, the ending felt a little fast compared to the rest. Lots of these stories end like that without being a problem, but this one just took things so *wonderfully* nice and slow that I kind of expected it to be a little... er... slower. Indeed.
But thank you so much for such a wonderfully story! This has got to be one of the best HikaGo stories I\'ve read. And I\'ve read far too many. I don\'t usually review so much cause anything I can think to say always seems so vague, but nice writing like this deserves feedback, and the stuff on this site doesn\'t seem to get so much, and that d and an awful shame. Have you posted it anywhere else, cause it just plain deserves to be read, too. I\'m sure the nice people at the hikagoyaoi board would love you forever and ever if you poseted it there. I really think this is one of the best!