rate_review Reviews

This is seriously the funniest and smuttiest lemon ever. It was just perfect. I loved it. I don\'t know how you do it, but it was amazing.

Someone placed a link to this fic on their journal, and I was sure I had read everything at aff.net. How wrong could I be? Not only had I not read this, I had never read anything quite like it. It was great to the point of making me not want to write any more smut ever, and live it to the profesionals, lol. I loved this. It really did read like something Shuichi would write, while been incredibly hot, funny, and realistic. It was great. Big kudos to you, and write the next entry, ne? Wonderful one-shot.

\"I can take off my own clothes! Just watch me you lube-buying bastard!\"
That line was just beautiful.
I wrote my own Gravitation smut, but it\'s not nearly as pleasant asrs. rs.

\"I\'m taking pillows to work with me.\" xDDD

YAY!!! it\'s so hard to find good smut these days... but this was an absolute perfect lemon... i swear to god, to shu-chan really write this? very good grasp of the character... or... maybe you really ARE shu-chan in which case... hiya! i love you and you\'re the coolest kid in the world! i wish you and yuki lots of happy sweaty love-making sessions to come...(no pun intended) very VERY good writing, very good smut. ^ ^ ~riley c.~

Hehe..that last line was great. good job

That was hot! I like the journal style writing, you did it very well =)

Trust me... YOu\'re the best lemon writere pae part where Yuki was timing Shuichi was so funny! i almost laugh my head off! I love the way you wrote Yuki.. It\' so... him... I don\'t know tow to describe it.. but I do enjoy your fic a lot... Write more!