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for Come As You Are

by animegher

person Gay Sherman
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Baby! You just keep rolling out this great story -- but could you PULEEZE roll a little faster?!!! I\'m still having a hard time finding updates and hope I have the latest (CH. 9). I\'ve about given up on MediaMiner. HA! Thanks for my continued entertainment and for your great story!
person Amethyst
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aya torture was really bad but I think things are going to take good turn but I fear if its going to be too late. Is Aya going to kill Youji for cutting his hair?( that is if they both survive through the mess)
I also want to say that God save Nagi if any danger is coming (especially from Schuldich) cause he\'s a good guy.
Can\'t wait for next update!
person Flamingolo
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, poor Aya. I don\'t see how the poor guy is ever going to be able to leave the house now, he has boogeymen honestly waiting around every turn ^_^ Glad to be clear on what\'s happening to him, and looking forward to what will undoubtedly be a rampage on Yohji\'s part. I almost feel sorry for Farfie and Schu *grins*. As always, your characterization of Yohji is so freaking perfect; it\'s so easy to picture him adapting Aya-like-tensed-to-snap attitude while waiting for the phone call. Omi and Ken\'s interaction was also very realistic, if not a little heart-wrenching. Excellent job on the chapter, you\'ve built the tension in this fic to an amazing point. Looking forward to more.
person Jukebox
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG....that is some serious Aya torture. I hope Yohji kicks Schu\'s a$$. Dang, can Aya even live with all that damage and bloodloss? *sniff,sob* great chap as always! Here\'s hoping the next chap is coming real soon...yay fight scene!!! *pleads with big puppy eyes for next chap*
person Koji-chan
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think I should have done it earlier...reviewing here instead on MM\'s site. So hopefully no fucked up reviews anymore ^_^.

Oh what the bloody hell, I\'ve never (really) read such scenes with such a violent/brutal and insane Farfarello! Oh and Schuldig isn\'t that better. Don\'t get me wrong here, although I winced very often while reading and shuddered at their actions, I liked it nevertheless <.< (it seems kinda wrong to say this, but it\'s the truth). Just whoa! And I just HATE this friggin\' and insane asshole called Farfarello. Hhm, Schuldig....ack, I hope Yohji and the other two so kick their bloody asses. *sighs* poor Aya.

^^;...so, first review here *hugs*.

~Ko-chan~
person Koji-chan
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O ...they didn\'t just fuck up my review here too, did they? I can\'t believe it...I give up, these archives have something against me -.- Rest of my review here:
<.< (it seems kinda wrong to say this, but it\'s the truth). Just whoa! And I just HATE this friggin\' and insane asshole called Farfarello. Hhm, Schuldig....ack, I hope Yohji and the other two so kick their bloody asses. *sighs* poor Aya.
^^;...so, first review here *hugs*.

~Ko-chan~
person Amethyst
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God story has turned as I had feared and I\'m wondering when it will turn as I wish it to be.
Please update soon!
person Flamingolo
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a fantastic fic...I\'m was so delighted to see an update! But, you evil little author you, leaving out any info on Aya *cough* SADISTIC. Loved the Schu vs Yohji scenes, you made it so easy to picture Yohji running after him until he passed out. And, poor, poor little Omi and Ken. What the hell will become of them *rips hair out*? Again, I think your characterization of Yohji is the best I\'ve ever read, you manage to capture his personality and make him unpredictable at once, truly an outstanding ability. Lovely job, can\'t wait for more *reverts back to childhood, pressing face to computer screen*...
person Jukebox
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again a fantastic chap!!!! But, I was a little confused on something. It has been a while since I read the first few chaps, and I need to go back to re-read, but I was thinking that Schu originally had a weird love thing\\obsession for Aya, seeing Aya as his possession\\property or his pet. Now he has switched to Yohji because of the drunk night together and he wants to get Aya out of the way? Or is he still fascinated with the redhead? Then, in the college bathroom, seems like he was also surprised at the love coming from Aya when the swordsman thought Schu was Yohji, right before he mistreated him. Hmmm...I\'m wondering if he\'s going to trick Aya again to get Aya to couple with him (especially now that Aya is so weak from blood loss), then decide he wants both Aya & Yohji? That might be interesting. Anyway, just a little confused on that because I was thinking Schu was feeling one way towards Aya but with this latest chap it almost seems like you have him seeing Aya as competition or something needing to be eliminated. And it\'s obvious that Yohji has no love for the German LOL. (*scratches head in confusion*)

But - awesome as usual! You rock!
person MurasakiSilver
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Write mooooore. *flails* You can\'t stop now.

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