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Not bad, but personally, I\'d like to see some lemon soon

If you continue with the way you are going you have a very well written story on your hands. Also although i find no real fault with this story except for the lack of updates you might find you write better if you come to trust yourself and your ability to write. How can you expect others to love your writing if you yourself hate it. Very good story though i might like it to be moved along a little faster or more updates either way is good

great story i was wondering when someone would get around to pokegirldum

your wrong pepole do read them but they dont review them for some reason

If you don\'t know anything about Pokemon, you shouldn\'t be writing Pokemon or Pokegirls anything. Especially since you claim to not like Pokemon, which you shouldn\'t be writing about things that you dislike. Either you\'re trying to look cool or you\'re just not so smart. Either way, you should take out the \"I\'m too cool for Pokemon\" line in the beginning, because you\'re writing about Pokemon, even if it is Pokegirls. If you don\'t like something, don\'t write about it. Your writing style isn\'t bad, you just need to get a real topic. Forcing yourself to dislike Pokemon and bragging about it to people who are reading your work because they personally like Pokemon isn\'t really that great of an idea. You could also try putting it in a different category instead of under Pokemon.