rate_review Reviews

Wow. Was Vicious ever out of character in this one and the previous. I had started reading Manipulation on Fanfiction.net, then found that you had the whole copy here, so I read it here, as well as the sequel. I must say, I wasn\'t too pleased. No offense, but some things were totally inacturate. For example, Vicious\' eyes are blue. And don\'t even try to go against that. If you had paid attention in the fifth episode, as well as another (I\'m unsure of which one at the moment, but the pictures I have both have his eyes as blue.)....

And for the record, his Syndicate is on Mars. Tharsis, I believe...

Hurry and finish! I read the first but I just started oon the second and I want to read it through! It\'s a great story hurry and finish! Please!

Wear is the lemon? I want lemon. It\'s a good story but I was expecting sexual scenes

I just read through the first 26 parter and then these four parts, and boy, this is a WONDERFUL fic! Just, I'd like to know where the lemon is..... *looks hopeful*