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Don't make them fall for each other and get all goofy and shit. I like it though, very detailed.

Hello! I'm reading this story since you started and I like that very much. But you made a smalstakstake: in Brazil, people don't speak spanish, WE speak portuguese. Paloma is a spanish name, and the japanese and half japanese in Brazil usually lives in São Paulo or the south states, and there is no beach where they usually live. There are not many japaneses in Rio and they usually don't go to the beach. They don't like the taned skin. I lived once in Rio, so I know about it.

I'm not censuring you, just giving some advices, ok? I like your stories and I just tought you would want to be more precise.

Big hugs from Brazil, my friend, and keep going,

Lere

I love it so far ^^ i was confused in the beginning but i started to understand on the second chapter ^^ and i love it ^o^


Kaoru-chan

This is shaping up quite well. I like the interaction between Kaoru and Kenshin. VERY HOT. By the way, capoeira is the brazilian martial art, created by slaves. And, yes, we speak portuguese and we do not eat tacos and we do not wear sombreros. Just a reminder.

I like, I like... I LLIKELIKE I LIKE!!

hmm how cute of Shinta...*wink wink* to affect her so much... If Kaoru is in such a disguise..different hair and tanned skin, is Kenshin too?

Looking forward to more!

De Lazy Lime

Ah, this has a lot of potential. it has a very nice flow and I like the gritty Kenshin and Kaoru. Keep it up!

ooh, already starting to love this!! want to see some k/k action of course ^___^ and the sooner they meet, the sooner the lemons come a-rollin\', no? because, there ARE going to be lemons right?

update soon!!

oh yeah, and korean people rule! XP

Woah...that was awesome. I was thinking it would be Misao actually, was quite surprised when it was Kaoru. Love it though, beautifully written, really, I look forward to more ^_^

wow this is interesting! im just wondering what are the couples in this fic? rei

wow this is interesting! im just wondering what are the couples in this fic? rei