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Ahhh! That settles it, yer amazing. Every time I hear those songs. (They split em up, but they work good together too) I think of Amaya, but I could never finway way to make it work... You blow my mind, honey, just so damn good. *Applauds* You kick ass, dont ever forget it! *hands you a kitten and a cookie*
Much luv,
Natakamani

Yeah, I noticed that u used a different style right away. I\'m trying to figure out which way I like better, lol. I mean, since the characters constantly bared their thoughts to the viewer, 3rd person was just as informative as 1st person, I think. Yet...I don\'t know, heh. -.-\' Whichever\'s more comfortable for you. ^_^ Welp...great job! Update asap! ^,~

Finally...a song I actually KNOW! =P lol I mean, I\'ve heard some of Seether & Wheezer\'s songs before, but none of the ones that you used, lol, so whenever I saw Tourniquet, I wuz like...ooh! I like this song! ^^ lol And poor Amaya...it\'s all so sad. =*( She reminds me of Mort Rainey from Secret Window in this chapter, rotfl...the whole talking to herself thingy while envisioning herself, or w/e, lol. It\'s very good...please continue soon! I feel like I could cry cuz I can feel her pain! U know u\'re an excellent author when u have that sort of effect over ppl! ^,~

No, no, I know EXACTLY what you mean with the songs and stuff! ^^ I think it\'s really cool that you gave someone as jagged-edged as Amaya the ability to play the guitar and sing. Not what you\'d expect, after all. ^_~ I really liked this chapter...it was cute/funny, & just really great. ^-^ And poor Spike...always being called an idiot! =P rotfl Please update ASAP! ^,~

LoL, \'course fluff works! ^^ I never thought of it as fluff, actually...it just seems natural by this point so they were so quick to jump into bed together, rotfl. And Aurora\'s so cute! ^^ Heehee To be perfectly honest, @ first I thought that James was going to double-cross her, but I guess not. I usually like it whenever lovers betray one another....just makes a big mess outta everything. I\'m all into writing messes, heh. -.-\' Maybe that\'s why mine are so dramatic, rotfl. Don\'t know what else to say other than great job, so...great job! ^,~ lol

LoL, yes I do love metaphors...especially when they\'re so neat! ^^ I like the idea, lol. And wow, u updated a lot since I last checked! O_O But that\'s okies, cuz I\'m determined 2 read them all ryte here, ryte now! ^-^ LoL, that wuz really cute w/ Aurora falling 4 Jet, rotfl...little kids do that ALL the time. =P I\'ve seen ippenppen on countless occasions, & it\'s just so hilarious how they\'ll immediately change their minds, lol. Welp...off 2 finish the fic! ^,~

LoL! No, I DIDN\'T expect ANY of that, heh. -.-\' And poor Jet, lol....wouldn\'t be surprised if he committed suicide after finding out. This Wraith guy\'s an interesting character...I thought he\'d be some Joe Blow like Roger, but he actually has some substance, so that\'s good. ^^ And jeez, Amaya seems to fall in luv with EVERY guy, rotfl...she really needs to make up her mind! =P I wonder if her \'love\' will turn out to be just an infatuation. After all, I thought I wuz \"in luv\" with sum1, only 2 realize that I just really really liked him, lol. Never been in love before, \'s \'s an absolute miracle that such a troubled person can finally find love in their world, lol. Welp...update ASAP! ^.~

Hey now, I said it was good! Fluff is good for some things, I wont deny that. I just feel wierd writing it, LoL. You always do a good job, fluff or not. And, as always, this is an excellent chapter. Now go deflate yer head, hon! *hands Levii a giant cookie* For bein so damn good!
Much luv, and a KITTEN!!
Natakamani

Haa! Another amazing update! ^^ You claimed that ch 6 was plotless, but I thought it was really kewl! =D I also liked ch 7, lol...it wuz really cute/funny/all that gewd stuff in an awesome fic! Update soon! ^,~

Hi-hi! I\'m here to review your quote \'eeevil ass\'! It\'s VERY good! And ::gasps:: Sith is pregnant?! YAY! ^^ I love drama! heehee =P And a pony, you say??? Wow, where ARE you getting all of this moo-lah?! Next time throw in a tiger! =P rotfl KEEP GOING! ^,~