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xxxxx^^ LOL
wHY rAMA dO THAT
siCKEN ASS pERVERT scUm...mwhahha

LOVE IT!!!! it is all lemony goodness. there were some weird mistakes but they were easy to figure out. You really need to update. I am on pins and needles waiting. I greatly look forward to it and will keep coming back hoping:) Again I must say LOVED IT!!!!

it is a really good story and it reminda me of something my b/f and i once did. but i musst say that was really intresting to read made me want to back to my b/f. then again he is a jackass

Laugh it up, at my address, it mean Hell, but this fanfic was the best! Write more, I love Ranma.Akane pairings! Opinion: I think that Ryoga and Ukyo make a great couple, don\'t you?

hey i really liked this fic it was very well written except for a few weird words here and there i certainly hope to see another chapter to this very soon! Keep up the good work!

I love this story and have stood by it faithfully but where is the next chapter??
I\'ve been waiting and waiting but no chapter. Please write another chapter before my next birthday which is in 3 months. Please???

i love it...

All told pretty good, I look forward to the update. Though I will say that you might want to go back through this chap and do some serious corrections, the DB error with AFF caused some problems with the read.

Having the chance to read the first version of the text, I have to say it keeps the best things, the humor, the sexuality(The nice and tender encounter), the sensuality (Akane\'s Upksirt), and in general Ranma\'s atmosphere.
I would like it to be longer, or have at least another set for them, maybe a change of posture, but we have to remember it\'s the first chapter.
An interesting add on would be a scene with Ranmachan after this one, I hope that will take place in chapter 2 (bathroom??)
Nifty story, keep up the good work, and stay put!! since I know you can do better.

HOT!!!

long live hentai/ lemon lovers!

ecspecially when they get ecspecially good lemons to read <.<