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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was fabulous. The characterization is wonderful, the scenes feel solid, your style is lovely.
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well written, nice narrative flow, and incredibly hot.
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bah, Hakkai knows everything! Great story methinks! *Shakes her head sadly* Poor, poor ignorant Gojyo.
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i [heart] you! x 8 billion. love love.
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
still lovin\' it
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fucking AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! This fic was wonderful and I throughly enjoyed reading it. I am saddened to say that I was honestly shocked to find such a good fic on this site for while I\'m happy that fanfic writers have a place where they can post even their raunchest fics, the majority of sad fics are sorely lacking. This story was highly developed despite its length. Your exploration of Sanzo\'s desire, his personal demons, his own self-denial, I found wonderfully enlightening and very much in character. Thank you, thank you for writing this fic and I promise to keep an eye out for more of your work.
Sincerely,
HDA
Sincerely,
HDA
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, WOW! That was so incredibly hot I was squirming in my seat! Excellent painting of Sanzo\'s character, and the visuals were... well... oh my. @_@ And boy, but do I love a beautiful man touching elf.elf... Unnnh...
(Incidentally, my Demon Diary fic - \"On Love and Lust - and Their Resultant Disasters\" - also has it\'s sexually repressed bishie jerking off in a bath. What a nice coiquidink, ne? ^_^)
(Incidentally, my Demon Diary fic - \"On Love and Lust - and Their Resultant Disasters\" - also has it\'s sexually repressed bishie jerking off in a bath. What a nice coiquidink, ne? ^_^)
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pardon me while I fangirl over this--I promise to try and put in some coherent comments every so often~ =3
First of all, your characterization of Sanzo in this story was so spot-on (to me, anyhow~) that it was scary. It was absolutely lovely: you were able to capture the angst, the inner turmoil, the moodiness and the reasons behind it so very well. I don\'t think I can ever stress enough just how much of a pleasure this was to read. The smut parts of the fic were delicious, but... I actually enjoyed the character pieces/analysis more. (You\'ve taken Psychology, haven\'t you? XD) As I\'ve said before, everything was just so spot-on. I loved it all.
Anw~ Iw~ I\'m going to go and check out your section to see if you have anything else for me to read. ^^
First of all, your characterization of Sanzo in this story was so spot-on (to me, anyhow~) that it was scary. It was absolutely lovely: you were able to capture the angst, the inner turmoil, the moodiness and the reasons behind it so very well. I don\'t think I can ever stress enough just how much of a pleasure this was to read. The smut parts of the fic were delicious, but... I actually enjoyed the character pieces/analysis more. (You\'ve taken Psychology, haven\'t you? XD) As I\'ve said before, everything was just so spot-on. I loved it all.
Anw~ Iw~ I\'m going to go and check out your section to see if you have anything else for me to read. ^^
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*glomps* that was awsome. Give us more? Please? *giggles*
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written and *very* tasty. ^_^ Is it going to stay a one-shot, or will Sanzo eventually get a chance to play out his fantasies? (If so, please count me in for the sequel!)