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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No offense, really, but My-chan and Piro-san.can bthe two of you please act your age, or at least stop fighting like 3 year olds. If Piro-san thinks that the story is senseless, then don't read it. If you're trying to correct My-chan, could you at least do it more nicely. I do believe she has put a lot of effort into this fanfic. Sides,how many PWP on this site makes sense, a horse fucking a human, make sense? Not much, so please ,accept things here with an open mind,if you wanna correct her or point it out to her, do it more politely, no one likes poeple giving them none-helpful critisim. Fighting over this topic with Piro is really stupid, it just means you're furious which is what he wants you to be. Just ignor him, what damage can he do with his keyboard?(besides hitting you that is,but your not within touch.)
Anyways, nice story, I've been trying so hard to find one with Ryoma,Fuji and Tezuka in it.
Anyways, nice story, I've been trying so hard to find one with Ryoma,Fuji and Tezuka in it.
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October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*tropf* das hat nichts mit Zickenterror zu tun, sondern allein damit, dass es mir bei dem Teil hier allein um den Spaß ging, und ich nicht finde, dass alles 100% Sinn machen muss ^^;; dann würde nämlich das ganze Konzept nicht mehr fuonieonieren. Und nein, ich hab nichts gegen Kritik, ich fand dein Einwand nur irgendwie Unsinnig, denn wie gesagt, es ist nur ein PWP und das ding soll Spaß machen, und sonst nichts.
Aber wenn du den Einwand mit der Realität schon bringst... hast du's denn schon ausprobiert? Ich meine, wir können alle nur über das schreiben was wir uns vorstellen, es sei denn wir ham persönliche Erfahrung, ergo "es schon mal gemacht".
Ich geb ja zu, dass "The Game" die Realität an manchen Stellen sicher vermisst, aber ich war auch nicht drauf aus ein authentisches Stück Fanfiction zu schreiben als ich damit angefangen hab. Daher sind so Mankos drin, geb ich ja offen zu. Hab ich auch nie abgestritten. Aber ich finds irgendwie unsinnig auf so Kleinigkeiten rumzureiten.
Aber wenn du den Einwand mit der Realität schon bringst... hast du's denn schon ausprobiert? Ich meine, wir können alle nur über das schreiben was wir uns vorstellen, es sei denn wir ham persönliche Erfahrung, ergo "es schon mal gemacht".
Ich geb ja zu, dass "The Game" die Realität an manchen Stellen sicher vermisst, aber ich war auch nicht drauf aus ein authentisches Stück Fanfiction zu schreiben als ich damit angefangen hab. Daher sind so Mankos drin, geb ich ja offen zu. Hab ich auch nie abgestritten. Aber ich finds irgendwie unsinnig auf so Kleinigkeiten rumzureiten.
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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*lol*
Dearest, even a PWP has to make sense! And well... For being undhe she shower while fucking: Did they use enemas to make their asses wet inside?!
It's solely about the fucking. But even if it is, try to stick to *reality* at least!
I'm not interested in you spamming my email box. That's why.
Did I hit a nerve or something?
Ah, aber wart' ma... Du bist typisch deutsch. Ich merk das schon. Zickenterror, sobald man nur ma' echte Kritik anbringt. Hehe.
Dearest, even a PWP has to make sense! And well... For being undhe she shower while fucking: Did they use enemas to make their asses wet inside?!
It's solely about the fucking. But even if it is, try to stick to *reality* at least!
I'm not interested in you spamming my email box. That's why.
Did I hit a nerve or something?
Ah, aber wart' ma... Du bist typisch deutsch. Ich merk das schon. Zickenterror, sobald man nur ma' echte Kritik anbringt. Hehe.
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ehm... sorry... But have you ever tried to use shower gel as lubrication?! Well, I dare say, have fun going to the toilet the next few days, Ochibi-chan!
Besides no one, absolutely NO one would endure it to be lay there for two days, without being able to move and *not* getting mad or freaking out! As nice and soft the captive gets treated!
And you know... there are those things you have to do every day. Like going to the toilet. When, my dear, when did Ryoma get the chance in those two days, to go to the toilet?!
This is a cheesy not thought through little piece of ficlet.
The only thing that was okay was the sex. But as it seems you have no clue about male/male sex. Using shower gel is one of the most stupid ideas yaoi fic writers ever came up with!
I mean, just put some shower gel on your dry hands or fingers and move them together for a while. You'll see what I mean!
Besides no one, absolutely NO one would endure it to be lay there for two days, without being able to move and *not* getting mad or freaking out! As nice and soft the captive gets treated!
And you know... there are those things you have to do every day. Like going to the toilet. When, my dear, when did Ryoma get the chance in those two days, to go to the toilet?!
This is a cheesy not thought through little piece of ficlet.
The only thing that was okay was the sex. But as it seems you have no clue about male/male sex. Using shower gel is one of the most stupid ideas yaoi fic writers ever came up with!
I mean, just put some shower gel on your dry hands or fingers and move them together for a while. You'll see what I mean!
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nownow, very clever not leaving your email so that I cannot answer you.
Whoever said, that Ryoma was NOT allowed t to to the toilet? In the first chapter I never said that he had to lie there unmoving for two days, now did I? You better read more carefully next time, or keep your thoughts to yourself. And like the warning said, this is PWP, it's supposed to be NOT thought through. get the hint?
it doesn't matter if it makes sence in real life, since it's fanFICTION, and it's all about sex sex which you said yourself was good. So what's your problem? This is not supposed to be a well thoughtout story. it's PWP. nothing else. It's about hot guys having hot sex. and it doesn't matter if it makes sense or not.
and how are their fingers dry when they're under the shower?
next time: think, then type. thanks.
Whoever said, that Ryoma was NOT allowed t to to the toilet? In the first chapter I never said that he had to lie there unmoving for two days, now did I? You better read more carefully next time, or keep your thoughts to yourself. And like the warning said, this is PWP, it's supposed to be NOT thought through. get the hint?
it doesn't matter if it makes sence in real life, since it's fanFICTION, and it's all about sex sex which you said yourself was good. So what's your problem? This is not supposed to be a well thoughtout story. it's PWP. nothing else. It's about hot guys having hot sex. and it doesn't matter if it makes sense or not.
and how are their fingers dry when they're under the shower?
next time: think, then type. thanks.
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME.
Oh for the love of the tenipuri god.. write more... o___o;
one of the best nc-17 fics i have read so far.. you got great talent ^_^ im looking forward to more fics in the not so distant future *hint hint* ^_~
Oh for the love of the tenipuri god.. write more... o___o;
one of the best nc-17 fics i have read so far.. you got great talent ^_^ im looking forward to more fics in the not so distant future *hint hint* ^_~
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...i loved it ^_^...great wonderful Ryoma torture ^_^...is there going to be another chapter????..because there should be
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe.. delicious evil fuji and yummy uke tezuka!! ^^
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! You wrote a sequel. Does this mean that there are more chapters of this fic? Love the way that Ryoma is dominated. I think that he\'s totally adorable and I love him with either Tezuka or Fuji. Him with both is just so yummy. More???