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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. A few minor grammatical and typographical errors but who cares? I love the metaphors, too, they're so creative. And I don't feel like either of them were really that OOC, but that might just be me. I like the ending too, so don't change it. Good job!
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww! how CUTE! they make such the most adorable couple, like, ever!!! i loved your story, and i think the reanef character was just perfect. heh, heh, only raenef would write himself a reminder to confess his love...and i could so see that happening with Erutis. Overall, i think this was one of the cutest stories of Eclipse/Raenef!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutely adorable
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude...Your story F**king RULED! I <3\'ed every minute of it! Write another! lol
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soap as lube??! O_o ow! Well, it\'s all good though...rae didn\'t seem to mind too much...or at all! ^^ That ending though was fine. I think it\'s even better that way, cuz unfortunate things like that always seem to interrupt the good stuff ne...well, i can imagine erutis doing something like that...::smirk::
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I read something about an update....perhaps a sequal??? *pleading tone* And I must agree that bath\'s and naked demons make for a good lemon.....
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for that delicious Raenef/Eclipse lemon!! Demon Diary fics are so rare ;_;.. Great authors like you is what this fandom needs! Keep writing!
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t think it was pointless, I though tit was... cute!^-^ You\'re such a fantastic writer- they way you discribed everything was so new and so origianl. You were right when you said there aren\'t many fic\'s out there with Eclips/Raenef pairings- I\'m glad you wrote one to add to the punny number, It made my night!
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story!! Pointless yaoi is always fun, but I could never actually see Eclipse calling Raenef \"honey\"...I dunno, it just doesn\'t seem to fit his personality. The rest of the story was cool though, so keep writing! ^o^ YAOI AHOY!!
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* Hey, don\'t diss the ending; that was the kawaiiest ever! ...Kawaiiest? @_@ Hmm... Yummy ficcy... That was actually the first Demon Diary fic I\'ve ever read! What a great way to start off ^_~