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for Bubble Bath

by rileycharlotte

person Liz B.
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!! THAT WAS FANTASTIC!!! YOU ARE SO GOOD!!! YOU TOOK ALL OF THE ELEMENTS I LOVE ABOUT DEMON DIARIES AND PUT THEM INTO A PERFECT LEMON ONE SHOT!!!!!! YOU ARE AN ANGEL!!!!!! This was so sweet and cute and at the same time a very hot fic!!!! great job!!!! YOU ARE WONDERFUL!!!! Keep up the good work!!!! It was so great!!! And, for the record, you did a great job even if you were a mindless, caffine-deprived author and believe me, I know what being caffine depirved is like....not fun!!! GREAT WORK!!!! *confetti falls from the sky and a huge cake comes out on a cart that says \"Great Job On Bubble Bath!!!\" with a graphic Raenef and Ecilipse scene on it as strobe lights go on and its a great Demon Diary dance pawithwith an ice scultpure also of Reanef and Eclipse doing naughty things*
person Liz B.
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh...I just realized I made a mistake and its not Demon Diaries and its Demon Diary....sorry......I don\'t think before I type usually.....just wanted to apologize for that....heh....but great job on the fic!!! It made me very happy! You still get the Demon DIARY, not Demon DIARIES Dance Party!!!!! ^_^
person Kaida-little dragon
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it! It\'s upsetting how little R/E lemons there are. The end was good. I found it funny she found them together. Well, bye!
person yokaze
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
water scenes are fun! bubbles too! ^,^ . . . *sigh* i need to get a life . . .
NEway, i love this fic even though it started off in a bit of a rocky start, but it got much better afterwords
^,^
person Naria lacour de Fanel
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-_- -_- I want a bath now.....with bubbles....and naked demons...ok, well maybe I\'d like to walk in on naked bishie demons in a bubble bath doing unspeakable things to each other....maybe even bishie Sohmas*faint*


Yesh, I\'m an author, I\'ve reviewed a story or two of yours before!! ^_^ I was just too lazy to log in today...meh...

Good sweet lemon...kinda an oxymoron, but it was gooooooooooooood... (just throw Aya in there!!)*evil cackle*

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