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JIMXAISHA IS THE BEST AND THIS FIC WAS BEAUTIFUL!!! I LOVED IT! AND THE SEX WAS HOT!

I applaud you. Short, sweet, and quite enjoyable. You really have a feel for Jim\'s unsure, and mature, and Aisha\'s bold and unpredictable personalities. A lot of people take the sex a bit too far, as far as sheer fetish comes, but your seen had just the right mix of passion, instinctive urge, and naivity. And there was the mild spice of lust that the torch between the two held. I\'ve really got nothing to criticize, as I don\'t believe in such things. You keep on writing, the mind and mood of a writer come in inconsistent waves... you\'ll go through phases, but I\'m sure they\'ll all be very enjoyable for you and your readers as well. You have a balanced writing style, and I respect that. But, I\'m beginning to feel a tad redundant, a dread habit of mine. ^_^()

So, with that, I\'ll leave you to your destiny, as I\'m sure it will be filled with good things.

Loved it, loved it, loved it!

that was HOT.... you should make another!

Great fanfic! makes me feel like i\'ve got a nest of cuddly lil hamsters in the bottom of my gut

Yes, this story was originally posted under the author name Celestial Vision several years ago on fanfiction.net. And yes, I am that same author who originally wrote this all those years ago. I have taken a new name that suits me much more than the old one did as I have clearly stated in the Bio section of my profile. I do not plagiarize, everything that is under my name are entirely orginal works that I have written myself.

1st things 1st. I LOVED IT. but i have a sad message for all of u other ppl. i saw this story years ago when it was on Outlaw Star FanFiction Archives. both this and take me 2 heaven were there. i only hope the real author posted this up. and yes this is my real sn so aim me whenever u guys want 2 get schooled on OLS. also stop by Lucky Jim! i wrote it. plz r/r

I'm a fan of outlaw star myself and I loved your portrayal of both characters I would also like to see a continuation of this Fan Fiction its a really good one.

I've admired this story ever since it was on fanfiction.netd amd am now very happy to see it appearing here. Thank you, and very good work. :)

Dude,this made me want to cry.*cries a river of tears* I would have never thought of this pairing myself darlin'.
Good job! Please make another story with these two por favor =)

Love,peace and some awesome Crisco cooking grease,
Michi-Sam