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for The Nudist

by Chuyuri

person wizli
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The perfect fic for a hot summer afternoon!, but now I want Yuki, Shuichi and a hot cold shower... *pouts*
person Jennifer
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing. That was very hott...and Yuki was in character, so mad props for that.
person Travellyr
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD This is AWESOME.

WHEEEEEEE!
person PIKACHU GODDESS
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaahhh! The thought of a NUDE Shuichi, and then a WET Shuichi AND Yuki...DROOL!!!

PIKACHU GODDESS
(o\';\'o)
person akuma_river
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cools beans.
person Aurora_kayd
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just wanted to say that i thought "It ran in rivulets down his face, each tiny drop greedy as they slowly caressed down the boy's face until they fell, clinging for just the barest of seconds in remorse before disappearing into the shallow pool beneath them." was the most beautiful line! is so pretty
person forgotten butterflies
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy... well. I think I might need a cold shower now. That was gooooood! Really funny ending!
person Hiei449
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!! That was such an awsome fic!!!! I was laughing so hard at some of the stuff!!!! especially the vend!!nd!!!!
person supergirlanna
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is soooo cute, soooo sexy, sooo hot, intense, amazing written, and it soooo needs another chapter! hehe, i can\'t get enough of it... and the end makes me think of shuichi running around naked again! oh ya! *sigh* i wish i could do that on hot days... right infront of my lover... lol!!! (if i had one!) oh and damn would i love to see shuichi do that!!! *drools* love the fic!
person Vapidbreath
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story was really sexy. I think it was pretty well written. The sex in the shower was hot, but the ending didn\'t sit well with me. I think it could\'ve been a bit better. Overall I think it was a fantastic story and that you should keep up the great work.

~VB

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