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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its was the best ever. i love shion and mu so much and so little that story on them. please continew I love it very much. if you have any story about two of them tell me i would love to read them all. up dated soon cant wait please !!!
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story what you did for it, it so wonderful! Please update again soon!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah! It's back ^_^ i'm so happy. and omg, ROFL xD Mu beating Roshi up with a pillow XDDD Priceless!! HAAHAH. But now who's this guy? Oh no...i have a feeling this isn't going to be good for Mu ;-; *pets him*. Can't wait for the next update ^_^
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh I liked it alot. And Kiki is sooo cute comming in on them like that. \"Mu, I heard you screaming!\" That\'ll be a fun story to tell in the future. :) Keep it up!
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i really liked this story, please update it soon, i`m really waiting for the update. Great pairings, i just love it.
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello Hiso Chan!
Your lemon scenes are always good, unique, none too graphic but sweet, and you have this style that really suit my liking. However.....
Can\'t you run the spell check first before you post? Because ocassionally I get the biggest turn off (and I believe most of your readers do, too) from the bad spelling. You keep mistaking basic words such as \'where\' and \'were\', \'you\'re\' and \'your\' and that\'s pretty disturbing especially since any ordinary word programm could fix that in no time. Did you type your stories straight in plain ASCII type? Well I suggest you type your stories in word first before change it into plain text for posting.
I hope this is not too harsh, coz believe me, I love you writings and would like to see it get better. Keep writing! ^0^
Your lemon scenes are always good, unique, none too graphic but sweet, and you have this style that really suit my liking. However.....
Can\'t you run the spell check first before you post? Because ocassionally I get the biggest turn off (and I believe most of your readers do, too) from the bad spelling. You keep mistaking basic words such as \'where\' and \'were\', \'you\'re\' and \'your\' and that\'s pretty disturbing especially since any ordinary word programm could fix that in no time. Did you type your stories straight in plain ASCII type? Well I suggest you type your stories in word first before change it into plain text for posting.
I hope this is not too harsh, coz believe me, I love you writings and would like to see it get better. Keep writing! ^0^
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Impressive chapter. I liked the comment about the little naked ninja, that was cute and the part where Kiki\'s warning Shion about what sort of behaviour he will accept...that was priceless. And I\'m still at a loss for words here, I want to say \"Finally Mu and Shion get together\"...but there has to be something better than that to say, don\'t you think? All in all I loved the chapter and I hope you write more soon.
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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*nosebleed* OMFG!
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November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HA! That was a great sex scene...and poor Kiki...I can see him now covering hyes yes and running away screaming. Mu & Sion are so kawaii!
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor little Mu. First he thinks no body loves him, then gets sick and when the love of his life declares, he faints and gets even more sick. But that makes him more dainty than he is. And I'm sure Shion will noice that.