rate_review Reviews

Hi again! ^^ I really liked the opening of this chapter, especially the background about schu's organized chaos. I thought that was really interesting. I'm not sure Schu & Crawfoo's interactions totally match the tone from the beginning of the story though. I mean, some discontinuity is to be expected since you've been working on this fic for such a long period of time but...I dunno, the flow just doesn't feel the same. Possibly longer chapters might be a solution...? *hopeful look*
I didn't really care for the golf club scene, although i think that was just the mood I was in. Nagi and Farfarello's interactions were good tension breakers in this chapter though. Gotta love Nagi's concern for his teammates! *snort* Am still eagerly awaiting more. I get so excited whenever this fic is updated. Thank you for entertaining me!

Oh so very good want more please!

You were right in your notes. Crawford is definitely manipulative, but I doubt Schuldig expects anything less. Poor Schuldig. Hopefully, Crawford will take care of him and maybe Großmutter will spoil him with muffins or something.

I'm glad you're back!! I really liked this chapter, especially the Brad and Schuldig interaction. Hope you'll update soon.

Hot damn, its been too long since I checked up on this story =D Still as awsome as I remember it! Although, now that I've gone a re-read it all, you KNOW you gotta update soon again, right?

BTW, Still the best line (one of them) in the entire story, and still sends me into hysterics everytime I read it: "just trying to give Brad some love handles to hold on to when he finally nails you into the mattress.” And I only mention it because it deffinately deserves Kudos and applause. *promptly starts clapping*

XP loved farf, nagi and schuldig's interaction in the WTF room (liked your explanation for it too). oh and isn't schuldig the quick little telepath (in reference to the last line). i very much look forward to the next installment. oh and i love how you're getting in to how the psychics use their powers, especially the precognition. divining is such an interesting subject, and that graphic little moment of endless possibilities captured its spirit very well.

AGain, this is fabulous. Excellent description of certain abilities from within. Lovely piece of work as always.

It will be interesting to see how things play out in terms of Crawford's and Schuldig's relationship after the punishment. I hope you update soon.

i can't speak for everyone else but i'd hang around for the long route. it'd be more interesting than just 'getting to the point' (i assume you mean sudden smut?) i mean, we've all hung around this long through the long periods of no updates, right?

and i look forward to seeing more farfarello, he is one of my favorites! :)

still love farf so much ^-^ some rereading of the fic was required before getting to the update, btw