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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m thoroughly enjoying this. I love Schu-stuff especially when it\'s as well written as this is. I hope we don\'t have to wait too long for an update.
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know, i think you just gave me a whole new thought on schuldig... it might be fun to be him. love what he did to the chick in the elevator, roflmao!
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hm, this is a nice premise. This fiction really has a certain charm to it. Yes, I like it indeed. I think it might be your characterization that draws me to this fic; I\'m really not a Crawford/Schuldig fan (I adore Brad, but I\'m not too keen on Schuldig.) I really like the way you represent his (Schuldig\'s) character, not two-dimensional, but not too overtly angsty either. Very nice. ^_^
Hm...and the promise of lemon is always a plus (especially when it\'s the promise of a Brad-tied-to-a-table-or-something-of-the-sort lemon.) So, keep up the good work, and I eagerly await more!
-Cami the Homicidal Bunny
Hm...and the promise of lemon is always a plus (especially when it\'s the promise of a Brad-tied-to-a-table-or-something-of-the-sort lemon.) So, keep up the good work, and I eagerly await more!
-Cami the Homicidal Bunny
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. Excellent. Will Schuldich play with any other peoples minds? Please continue.
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Geez! Großmutter is a sly one, isn\'t she? *luv \'er
Your usage of German is very accurate, are you German? Piece of unwanted advidon\don\'t overdo it, please? Although a little
Ja and Nein and the occasional Großmutter are fine, maybe drop in a swear word but maintain the low profile, otherwise it would be
unnerving and distracting from your very good style. Seriously you are *so* nice to read. No repetitions, the sentences are neither too complicated nor simple.
It is just g-o-o-d and gives me the impression that you know what you are doing.
I was quite surprised that Schuldig wasn\'t aware of his attraction to Crawford. Poor Brad, now Schuldig is on the hunt, he\'ll be in for some surprises, I wager.
Will Brad feign indifference despite his own lust for the German? Will he try to reason with himself that things would get to messy if he started things with the redhead?
Will Schuldig fall apart and Brad rugh to his side or will an unexpected third party come into the mix?
Please continue and soon!
read you
ryushin
PS: Liked the elevator incident!
Your usage of German is very accurate, are you German? Piece of unwanted advidon\don\'t overdo it, please? Although a little
Ja and Nein and the occasional Großmutter are fine, maybe drop in a swear word but maintain the low profile, otherwise it would be
unnerving and distracting from your very good style. Seriously you are *so* nice to read. No repetitions, the sentences are neither too complicated nor simple.
It is just g-o-o-d and gives me the impression that you know what you are doing.
I was quite surprised that Schuldig wasn\'t aware of his attraction to Crawford. Poor Brad, now Schuldig is on the hunt, he\'ll be in for some surprises, I wager.
Will Brad feign indifference despite his own lust for the German? Will he try to reason with himself that things would get to messy if he started things with the redhead?
Will Schuldig fall apart and Brad rugh to his side or will an unexpected third party come into the mix?
Please continue and soon!
read you
ryushin
PS: Liked the elevator incident!
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very cute story. I hope that you will continue on with it very soon. I love Schwarz centric fics and this one looks like it is going to be good. Continue on soon, I\'m a very impatiant person! Ja, CC
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really a great story!! Your characterization of the Schwartz characters is very interesting. I very much like the humor of the story, and your writing style if very consistent and well developped. I found it very easy to visualize the things that happened in your story, and your subtle hints have definitely kept me interested!
Update soon!!
Update soon!!
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far. for some reason I kept wanting Nagi and farf to jump eachother...wishfull thinking.....anywho,
I hardly ever see any shu/cra stories this is really good it makes me giggle. especially when shu was drapped over crawford,
and crawford had to keep his comporsure. hehe. yup looking out for the next chapter.
I hardly ever see any shu/cra stories this is really good it makes me giggle. especially when shu was drapped over crawford,
and crawford had to keep his comporsure. hehe. yup looking out for the next chapter.
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh, i really hope that week goes by fast! I want to read more!
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another great chapter! For some weird reason I really like Schwarz domestic scenes and you wrotat rat really well. Say, can I get the picture of a sleepy Schuldig? ? ? ^_^