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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very promising start. Fluent style.
You added a nice twist to Schuldig\'s character, making his mind so open he wanders into a Spanish market place *hilarious idea btw.
Already hinting at a connection between Oracle and Mastermind - the doors are open! - literally. Liked that very much.
Let\'s seo wio will march through whose first, shall we?!
Preferably soon!
You added a nice twist to Schuldig\'s character, making his mind so open he wanders into a Spanish market place *hilarious idea btw.
Already hinting at a connection between Oracle and Mastermind - the doors are open! - literally. Liked that very much.
Let\'s seo wio will march through whose first, shall we?!
Preferably soon!
schedule
June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was actually pretty funny. I don\'t usually like stories focusing on Schwartz, but this one was good, so far. Please continue soon!
schedule
June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has lots of potential, please continue it soon! Schuldig waking up and shouting stuff in Spanish was pretty funny ^_^