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:) love that episode, and giving schuldig a mental track through it is always good. i do kinda wonder about that sometime, why he chose to screw with omi & oka. frustrated and bored is as good a reason as other (and then there's the good ole reasoning that he's just a jerk). i actually just watched that disc with a friend of mine the other day and had to point out to him that what schu did was in no way job related, he really is that much of an asshole.

now for future episode quoting, do you mean omi's 'ooooouukaaaa!' 'doushite?!?!' wails, because those are frickin' hilarious! ^-^ <--almost as evil as schu

Yay! I've missed this story. I want Schuldig to visit Großmutter again.

Solaras lives! Finally!

I've been reading this story without saying anything for a while. I finally got an account to leave a review. I'm loving this fic! I had never thought much about Brad and Schu being together until I started reading your story, and now I love the couple. :) I can't wait for the next update!

hey......um, *bites lip* do u think life will let u update soon?...... *blinking puppy eyes*

no, plot is a good thing. i can appreciate the slow route...haven't had me own computer in awhile so i've had to take a long break from ficcie, but on the plus side it means i apparently get to read a few new chapters all at once and you get a few new reviews all at once.
actually, the epiphany thing worked nicely. i've felt that since schu is such a two dimensional uncaring asshole in canon, weiss fic where he gets romantically attached to someone instead of just physically (non PWPs, basically) are always a bit of a stretch, but the needing to feel real thing works nicely. i dunno, i thought this was a good chapter, and the fact that you are layering on plot is what makes this an interesting story that stands out in the sea of smut that is the weiss ficcie community.
anywho, keep up the good work and i am on to the next chapter :)

ooo, i liked that one. you work really well with farfarello. when you're done with this fic, you should do something focusing on him (i said when you're done, because you do not work at a fast enough pace to handle two stories at once without torturing your fan base [pointing a finger sternly]). very few authors seem to nail him, and the japanese people who created him certainly didn't develop him enough...or understand christianity and irish catholicism in particular enough to really figure him out. anyway, you write good dialogue for him and seem to get into his head rather well (however much of a compliment that can be, i mean it well) keep up the good work!

does that mean you're going to bring in the weisslings? that would be fun...i mean, i'm not dumb (not completely anyway) i know that was a reference to the magnificently beautiful death of the whiny purple thing known as ouka, but one can hope the main characters of the fandom could make a cameo...
seems like crawford's had a developmental change in attitude...maybe a chapter from his perspective would help explain things...?
by the by, i know that if this conversation had transpired with the schuldig i've developed in my own fan fiction, then the line about takatori hurting schu would have scared the shit out of him based on that earlier chappie where takatori was lusting after him. he'd have been scared crawford was planning on getting him raped or something, not exactly visions of golf clubs. so anyway, yeah. just something to throw out there.
okay, thankee for the added chappies and please keep going!

Keep it up! I don't want the one to die for another 6-10 monthes! It's really good! You've got the characters down pat, now keep it moving!

i'm abso-fucking-lutely in love with this story.
i don't care how long it takes u to finish it, its on my favorites now. ^_^

you're writing style is very professional. & i LOVE the Marlowe reference! XD
i squee over Farfie too. u write him sooooo well -that's hard to do for many ppl.