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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again, another wonderful chapter! But it somehow feels I'm left to ponder with another cliffhanger. *twitch*
Hope to see another update soon! Or I might just go mad.
I'm always checking in every week as sad as that sounds. Haha.
Update! Update! ^^''
Hope to see another update soon! Or I might just go mad.
I'm always checking in every week as sad as that sounds. Haha.
Update! Update! ^^''
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL! What a fabulous start! Looks like it's not easy for one precognitive to get some peace and quiet around his team. ;) The part about Schuldig leaving his door open a crack was endearing, for lack of a better word. So Crawford merely sees the practicality behind it when he follows that example, because it helps Schuldig sleep better and consequently himself as well? Haha, something tells me that's not all there is to it. It might just take the precog a while to realise. ^^
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Since my first review was only for chapter 1, here's more--lots of it. ^^
ch.2-3:
Haha, poor Crawford! Must be hard (no pun intended, lol) to have a half-naked telepath around when you're determined to not take note of him in a sexual way. *gg*
Schuldig certainly is full of mischief. His meddlings in the elevator--priceless! ^^
Großmutter, eh? She's a very kind woman and seems to care a great deal about Schuldig, that's too sweet! No doubt she'll keep trying to turn Schuldig into a sumo wrester, physically speaking. lol She's a very perceptive woman, too. Let's see if she'll manage to push Schuldig in the right direction as far as Crawford is concerned. *grins*
ch.4-5:
Takatori is such a leech! Bah! Brad should allow Schuldig to kill him. Anyhow, he *does* get protective where the telepath is concerned. Hah! I knew it! ^^
Games with God? Just the perfect concept to keep Farfarello reigned in. ;)
Oh, and may I add that you're mean? To get Schuldig all worked up, and then have Crawford dump his ass on the floor only because he got another couple of visions and remembers what he's got to do? Grmph! You didn't even allow Crawford to get some realease in the shower! *pouts*
ch.6-8:
“I said chip at the ice block, not go at it with a sledge hammer!” Sledge hammer indeed! *chuckles* Just what would Schuldig do without his Großmutter, I wonder? He sure needs someone to spell out his own feelings to him (not to mention those of Brad). Gotta love that "love handles" comment, too. ^^
Schuldig's go at mission "watch Brad for signs of what Großmutter called affection" is true to the telepath's nature as I picture him. Irritates the shit out of Brad. Hehe.
ch.9-11:
Ah, Schuldig the tortured soul. Makes me want to hug him and never let go again.
Farfarello's attack on Schuldig came as a bit of a surprise. Quite intense. Gave me the shivers. Farfarello really is crazy--the hunt on which he takes Schuldig is once again proof. Then again, he's ordering knifes on the homeshopping channel and is fully aware of return options, etc. Crazy, yes, but not dumb. I like that view of him. ;)
Change of topic: would Schuldig and Brad figure out already what they mean to each other?! Aaargh! No, honestly, great bathroom scene there with the two of them. Some very sweet moments, the expected doubts, and the inevitable restoration of shields. I never expected it to be easy for them. ;)
P.s.: Since you seemed in doubt: you used and translated the expression "Halt die Schnauze!" just fine. Should you ever need any advice on anything to do with German, don't hesitate to approach me. I'm a native speaker. ;)
ch.2-3:
Haha, poor Crawford! Must be hard (no pun intended, lol) to have a half-naked telepath around when you're determined to not take note of him in a sexual way. *gg*
Schuldig certainly is full of mischief. His meddlings in the elevator--priceless! ^^
Großmutter, eh? She's a very kind woman and seems to care a great deal about Schuldig, that's too sweet! No doubt she'll keep trying to turn Schuldig into a sumo wrester, physically speaking. lol She's a very perceptive woman, too. Let's see if she'll manage to push Schuldig in the right direction as far as Crawford is concerned. *grins*
ch.4-5:
Takatori is such a leech! Bah! Brad should allow Schuldig to kill him. Anyhow, he *does* get protective where the telepath is concerned. Hah! I knew it! ^^
Games with God? Just the perfect concept to keep Farfarello reigned in. ;)
Oh, and may I add that you're mean? To get Schuldig all worked up, and then have Crawford dump his ass on the floor only because he got another couple of visions and remembers what he's got to do? Grmph! You didn't even allow Crawford to get some realease in the shower! *pouts*
ch.6-8:
“I said chip at the ice block, not go at it with a sledge hammer!” Sledge hammer indeed! *chuckles* Just what would Schuldig do without his Großmutter, I wonder? He sure needs someone to spell out his own feelings to him (not to mention those of Brad). Gotta love that "love handles" comment, too. ^^
Schuldig's go at mission "watch Brad for signs of what Großmutter called affection" is true to the telepath's nature as I picture him. Irritates the shit out of Brad. Hehe.
ch.9-11:
Ah, Schuldig the tortured soul. Makes me want to hug him and never let go again.
Farfarello's attack on Schuldig came as a bit of a surprise. Quite intense. Gave me the shivers. Farfarello really is crazy--the hunt on which he takes Schuldig is once again proof. Then again, he's ordering knifes on the homeshopping channel and is fully aware of return options, etc. Crazy, yes, but not dumb. I like that view of him. ;)
Change of topic: would Schuldig and Brad figure out already what they mean to each other?! Aaargh! No, honestly, great bathroom scene there with the two of them. Some very sweet moments, the expected doubts, and the inevitable restoration of shields. I never expected it to be easy for them. ;)
P.s.: Since you seemed in doubt: you used and translated the expression "Halt die Schnauze!" just fine. Should you ever need any advice on anything to do with German, don't hesitate to approach me. I'm a native speaker. ;)
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE!! MORE!!! MOOOOOORE!!! i'll say it again.. this story is spectacular and PERFECT. you have them characterized exactly like i picture them.. makes me feel so damn inferior writing, but i cant stop reading your stuff!! please.. please, please.. give me more!!
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*wiggles with happiness* I was so excited that you had updated! Squee! I hope you update again soon, but if it takes a while its ok too. As long as you don't abandon it completely! ^__^
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you updated! I was cheering Schu on as he was chipping at the ice in the bathroom. However, I am worried about Crawford's warning on Takatori. Schu has always trusted Brad to take care of him/protect him, so it'll be interesting to see how he reacts.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! I was worried that you'd forgotten about the fic, but seeing the new chapters up just made my week. ;_; Excellent work, as always, and I hope to see more from you soon! =D
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I reviewed at the very beginnig an couple of times, but because I thought you weren't continuing this story, I left it. Glad to see your still at it. Watched all 5 DVD's of Weiß Kreuz and now I love Schu even more ^^ Hope to see you update soon, can't wait for more SchuxBrad!
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I really hope you are planning on continuing it, cause I'd love to read more.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To answer your question, I love long stories but only if they are updated often. If a writer thinks they may never finish a story, I'd rather have the short version.