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by Solaras

person shorti
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the best WK fanfiction I\'ve read on this site and ff.net. You are the first author I\'ve read since reading off nephente-at-the-gate (if you like SchuFarfie parings that\'s the best site for em) that could actually get Schuldig right. All the other\'s totally butcher his personality and make him too damn sentimental. I absolutly adore how you did Farfarello!!! I\'ve always thought of him and Schu getting along really well, but on account that Schuldog doesn\'t believe in God you bring up a good point in Farfie getting pissed off at him. the closing argument between Schu Farf and Nagi was purrrfectly done. again, this was the bestest WK fic I\'ve read in 4ever!!!!! Can\'t wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!
keep writing
shorti

(p.s. sry, can\'t leave my email on account that mine\'s down and I\'m sharing with my parents currently *bleh*)
person shorti
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i never review on this site, but i luv this story too much not to!!!! The elevator scene was creative and very Schuldig. I love the interaction between Schuldig and Midori. I can\'t get over how well you\'ve done his character, I believe this is the bestest bestest WK Schwartz fic I\'ve read in all my searching!!!!! keep writing!!!!! magnificent plot!!!! wonderful characters!!!! and just overall very good

~shorti
person shorti
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Schuldig *snuggles pouting Schu* how mean of Brad!!!!
neways, this isn\'t going to be another fic where Brad realizes he likes Schu after Schu\'s dead is it??? THose are so sad
see you next chapter
shorti
person shorti
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
getting up early sucks, alarm clocks waking you up early suck even more, and I don\'t know how to use my alarm clock either. i won\'t even smell coffee if it hasn\'t been loaded down with sugar or vanilla, and hopefully Schu will realize that within 5 minutes of talking to him Brad showed concern. Update soon, oki??
person Ravenstar
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you continue this story. It\'s very good, and I really like the \"grandmother\", she\'s a wonderful character, and some one that compliments Schuldig very well. I look forward to reading more. I guess good things do come from bing bored and choosing stories at random, after all, I found yours, didn\'t I? And i happen to think it a very good thing indeed. Ja ne.
person Dora Tany
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The best Shuldih/Crawford fic I have read in ages... And still there is no new chapters, not even a word. Granny would be mad at your, our cruel author. What did you say about \"next week\"? Your time just runs differently, doesn;t it?
person Sexxi Twisted Angel
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oohh. I like. Very good with keeping all the characters in their places. Poor Schu, he was just about to get some then Brad went all ice-bitch on him, now THAT is evil. heh. And Takatori wanting Schu *shudders*. Can\'t wait for the next ones.
person Harmonie Des Anges
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMMIT!!!!!!! NO! I love this story, please update soon! It\'s so cute, I love Grandmother...she\'s SO funny! hee hee hee. I also love the family dynamic (no matter how fucked up) that you portray, cause in a way.... a very sick and twisted way, Schuldig and Nagi are almost like brothers....Brad\'s something of a father figure I suppose....and Farf... Farf\'s kind of like a dog.... a very rabid, scary, creepily smart dog that you have to let things tear up now and then. But I digress. Seriously, please continue this soon.
person SavvySiberian
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I find this kinda funny… I’ve only reviewed two stories tonight in my fanfiction ventures Phantoms of Past and Future on fanfiction.net and now this one. Which I didn’t even realize were both by the same person until I looked at your profile. That shows I really do enjoy your style of writing. You’ve pulled me in! I really really really am enjoying this fic… You’ve got the characterization down. Your grandmother character is really unique and the whole premise is just original. I can’t wait to see what happens next. You’ve gotta update soon! If you didn’t it’d just be cruel since you’ve pulled me in so far! So update!
person Aurael
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heya,

just wanted to say that I really like this story. Schwarz (aside from Farf XD) aren\'t as mindnumbingly insane as many see them. No OOC-ness, too. Both Crawford and Schuldig are depicted well. Make sure to continue, I can\'t wait for a slowly melting Crawford. *thumb up*

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