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by Solaras

schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this fan fiction so much if you don't keep updating it i will search and destroy. just kidding! much lurve! well i just enjoyed it so much i thought i would tell you because i know i enjoy reveiws on my work as well. i feel that your characterization on Crawford is very well thought out and is developing very well. and i also feel that you are fiting in the Grandmother amazingly because i thought it was going to be another annoying oc. so nice job and keep up the great work!

Courtney
person Pandora
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cute chapter. I usually don't like it very much when new characters are added, but I really like the 'grandmother' person. Wise and yet humerous - a wonderful combination if you ask me.

Keep it up!!
person eMu
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes...return of grandmother. that was a great little chapter. i loved the last line, by the way. urgh...i went through a lot of effort to see this chapter actually, as my house computer broke and i had to work today, which meant as soon as i got out i had to rush to the library before it closed and made it with the window of a half hour. and yes, i knew your fic was updated because my computer worked just long enough to let me know there was a new chapter and then died right when i had to leave for work. anyway, i thought it might make you smile to know my devotion to this fic causes me discomfort. can't wait for the next update!
person Random Loser
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fweeeee! Updated! yaaaaay! *does a happy dance* And it has Grobmutter! *does another happy dance* Whee, I needed this. Anywyas, ecellent work, as always. I can't wait for the next chapter. Wahahaha... *wonders what's going to happen with SchuSchu's observations.. hee hee hee...*
person Nozomi
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!!! I can't believe she said that!! "just trying to give Brad some love handles to hold on to when he finally nails you into the mattress." and after she basically tells him not to be so vulgar! I love it! Can't wait for more!
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Solaras! Hehe, the best, that was. I loved Granny's proverbs. Oh, and I loved the other chapters (from 4) which I also read tonight.
... Could it be? Do you make Schuldig LIKEABLE? *gasp* This is great, can't wait for more. Spitze!

-Cami the Homicidal Bunny who thinks *coughschuldigshouldgivebradheadunderhisdesklateroncough*
person Zin
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo.. this was so cute! Love handles...waiiii.. ^^;
person ryushin
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Großmutter!
They have the nicest conversations. To think that Mastermind lets himself gets pushed around
like the brat he can be, is really amusing and heartwarming.

One small things "to" and "too" - you tend to forget the second "o" in "too".
Apart from that I was really happy about the update. RL can be a bitch.

Now, I'm anxious to know what comes next and what does Brad think/feel/want?
Waits patiently for update. Loved the chapter.

Read you later
ryushin
person Throwerchick
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW... let me say WOW!! I am an avid reader of Weiss, well, Schuldig fan fics... (I do love the little shit i admit it..) and I have to tell you I adore the little bits you've given my Schu-Schu. I've been struggling to give hhe phe personality he deserves and you nailed him! The dream-babling-interceptions are a riot.. exactly what I was hoping for.. and the way Brad leaves his door open is absolutely precious. *glomps Brad and Schu simultaneously - yes... I have that long of arms...* I'm having a ball reading your fic... Well done over all. I can usually find some consrtuctive bits to point out, though now I'm just jumping up and down like a rabid fan girl waiting for the next chapter! An adorable Schu, an emotionally constipated Brady, and an amazingly wonderful grandma make your fic incredibly memorable. I just think you should get all the props you deserve. ^_^ SO GIVE ME MORE MORE MORE!!! PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
person Rae
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
n_n I love die Großmutter! ^_^ Ahahaaha! Schu's v. petulant in this chap, na? Eeeheehehehe. I can't wait for the next one, but school comes first; I understand =\ But but but! Hurry anyway XD, And I love it!

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