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for When I Call, Be There...

by foxyfez22

schedule June 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I really love this story but there is only 2 chapters and I don't know if u did it on purpose but u skipped the part where Thru talks to Aki to.  I'd love it if us fix that and if u would continue this dtory

person reids
schedule April 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Its good im confused theres a huge skip in the chapters at the end of the frist one she is leaving to go see Akito but at the start of the 2 one she has already sleeped with him....is there a messing chapter or something
person Kinoko
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
D= Damnit woman,WHERE'S PART 2? WHERE.WHERE.WHERE?
person Nuni
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked your story but it seems that there is a chapter missing. What I\'ve read so far I liked so please continue to write and when you upload he missing chapter e-mail me so I can come and read it.
person ~sm-candy~
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one was excellent I loving it please have more I love A/T fics this one is no exception it was wonderful!.

Please keep going!

~sm-candy~
person ~sm-candy~
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter was ok but I would like to see more A/T interaction maybe you can show flashbacks to what happened at the main house with him although it\'s obvious?.

Just a thought but still the chapter did do well keep going and up A.S.A.P.

~sm-candy~
person DarkLuna
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the first chapter, it\'s very original!!!!
Really hope you continue it!!!!!!!!!!!
person PainfulRememberance
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please update this fic! And also add part 2 on this I never got a chance to see it so get it up ASAP please
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAMMIT WOMAN WHAT ABOUT PART 2!? WHAT HAPPENED I MUST FIND OUT UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNN!
person Sasha
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Continue!

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