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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is so good. Please keep up the great work! Poor Tohru...Update soon.
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
not bad!
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i realy liked your story its the first i've read in a while because my comp. broke down but i really liked this one pleaplease write more and i'll read them!
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow I like it, I thought I wouldn\'t but I can\'t wait to see when they\'ll find otu she can hug them^ Se^
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was one of the best stories i have ever read!!! i do hope that you write more. your an extreamly good writer.
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting set up. Love the story, though short it is. I can\'t really tell how well the story will turn out based on these three chapters, but it looks like a promising start. I look forward to more chapters. Keep up the great work.
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter! I can\'t wait to read more! POOR Tohur!
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooohhhh......i like it...i wanna read more!
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool. I like it. Keep up the good work. I love dark fics. Actually one of my fav couples is *shock* Naraku and Kagome. And now Akito and Tohru. Love the forbidden love hate relationships.