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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No offence but you REALLY need to proof read things before posting them. Every chapter has horrible grammar and mistakes. Please get a Beta or something to help you cause i\'m at the point where I don\'t want to read anymore, i\'m only one chapter 4 and i\'ve had enough. The plot itself is fine, its just the grammar and such. Also you seem the mix up the names Ivory and Ebony a lot