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wow way to go with this fic... any chance you would write one with melisa?

O.O *nosebleeds* Ok... that was fuckin' HOT!!!! MORE, like the dinner and dessert scene >=D

::just stares at the screen:: umm..... ::takes a deep breath:: THAT WAS FUCKING AWSOME lol that just got me hot.... and I can\'t get any ::sobs:: I REALLY REALLY loved it.... I dont really like that girl.... (dont know why shes really cute though) but now I really like her.... this was awsome..... GREAT WRITER I wish I could write sex stories like you

That was a great story, a really good read and very detailed. I give it two thumbs up ^^

i can only say keep going with this or write more Sosuke/Tessa(they are my favs) you write perfectly keep going like that.

Oh my! That is so dang hot! I love it...keep it up. I am huge fan of Sousuke and Tessa.

Got to say, I was positively surprised by this fic. It started out fine, the characters were pretty IC and basic plot somewhat plausible(though, I still can\'t imagine Tessa cooking something... she doesn\'t seem like the person to do that.). I can\'t remember seeing/hearing sousuke ever calling Tessa \"madame captain\". Maybe it\'s bit more proper, but it was always taisa(captain) in the anime. I also think that it would be pretty OOC for sousuke to \"trying not to stare at the sweet curves of her ass\", when he doesn\'t even think anything about kisses(or know what they are). Also, you made the \"love\" sound lot like a quick crush, which I too think was bit OOC(especially after what Tessa said after the behemont thingy.. or whatever that big red robot was). Also you just made them jump into sex after few kisses right in Tessa\'s office. And they knew surprisingly much about sex overall, but lemon without that wouldn\'t make much sense.

Anyway, good fic, write more, liked it, and it reminded me a lot of Random1377\'s fmp fic.

Now here\'s a pairing you don\'t find often! ^_^ My preferred and favourite actually. You write very good lemons! Keep at em!

LOL Soske always a military mind lol, but to the point this wasvery good, write a sequil or another chapter to this. I mean this could turn into many chapters if done right.

lmao when i read \"pressing her pelvis harder against him.\" i thought pelvis was penis iwa s like wtf? lol u r a god writer lol keep up the good work!