rate_review Reviews

I enjoyed reading the story. The characters in this seem very close to the actual characters in the manga. The only thing I would advise is to read and edit your story. It seemed like while writing you got really into what you were writing and then didn't go back and edit. Because of this there are a lot of misspellings and editing problems that distract from the action you wanted to convey. These words wouldn't be picked up on spell check because they are different words, such as salvia for saliva and fiction for friction. Other than that I was having a lot of fun with your story. I was saddened that they didn't have any smut in the manga and was thrilled to read that you continued where the manga stopped short.

I actually liked your lemon. It's one fo the better ones i've read. Very sappy, but hey, not all of us are into bondage (I am...) and seriously though, who wouldn't enjoy the sight of a naked Raenef falling into your bed?

Yes, um...MUST I rant endlessly about how addicted I am to your writing style, not to mention the pure bliss of your lemon? I, like, needed a drool sponge. Yes, a drool sponge. Not rag, sponge. Rag just...wouldn't cut it, frankly.
Write more. Or... I dunno. I'll...blow up your computer. >>; I'm a little brain dead after that, ok? Give me a break.

Very cute. Actually I was totally convinced that the actual manga was going to go in this direction. But alas in the end it didn\'t. Anyway, I liked it, Great Job!

DONT YOU DARE! How can you do this to us? :( Give us a good story and then threaten to never write one as good as this ever again? you\'re so mean!! please write more!

Your lemon didn\'t suck.^^ Well, it did, but in the best possible way.... XD feel specail - I chose your story to be the first DD story I read, and I enjoyed it very much. Mmm... sexy demon bishies...

oh my god that was great but why;d he have to fall asleep before eclipse told him that he loved him? that was my only qualm. please keep writing and update again soon.

thanx mizukimarr910

It was a nice story you got going there. Though it would be better if it didn\'t have the mistakes. Maybe you should get a beta, it never hurts to have someone check over your work. And it be nicer without the mistakes. All in all it was a lovely story. Hope to read more soon.

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Please tell me you\'re a virgin. Because that was one of the most unrealistic sex acts I\'ve ever read. Doing any of that would cause tearing. They wouldn\'t need lube, there would be more than enough blood. Ick.