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for A Fine Line

by Kureno

person neko#8
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn kyou and his conclusion! argh... poor poor yuki... nice love scene, but HEARTBREAKING ending for this chapter!!! WHY?!?!?!!? omg... kyou and yuki were... aww... update soon! hope they get back together...
person Enzeru
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is really riveting! Kyo is being a little too dense for my decadence but thats ok. i hope it has a happy ending! T_T keep on posting!
person iria
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pleeease continue, this story is so great!!!
person Polka dot
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
rocky much, but that's the way ti should be between those two.
person Abby
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heyyy....i just wrote a new FF called "Akito's Demand" (i knoe gayest title ever) but i relle need ur help...somethin about it is off and i dont know what to do and i want you to help me b/c u r a frigen awesomme writer...and im still young and havent mastered writing techniques the way u have..so plzzz if u can, help me out a lil bit ok?? u can go read my story if u want and find stuff in it u think i need to change...ill glady take in any info u need to give me to help make my story better!! ~_^ much lovee...by the wayy..this story omfg amazingggg!!!!
person weiss kittyn
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GYAHHH!!! you HAVE to update this soon~! what happens with Yuki and Kyo? Will they ever get together? Please tell you you\'re adding another chapter soon?! PLEASE?


kittyn
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!!! I hope you do decide to add more to it, because I thought you had a great grasp of the characters, and it was a both meaningful and incredibly hot story! Plus, I am in love with all things silverchair, and the song fit perfectly with the story ane che characters. I especially liked how you used the words at the end, leaving off with \'I want you...\' Beautiful. Just a really well done story. My compliments.
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I\'m an idiot for not realizing you\'d already written more, but ah ... ... Anyway, I can\'t wait for the next update! I\'d never realized that Trent Reznor wrote such beautiful lyrics before now - and every song you chose fit in really well... Wonderful writing, compelling story, and I eagerly await more! Rock on!
person JarredGoddess
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve caught not only Kyo\'s personality almost to a \'T\', but you\'ve got the inner turmoil so perfectly that I can\'t even begin to use words to explain it. I\'m quite impressed with the story...we ARE going to get more, RIGHT?
person Chelle-chan
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff! Very well written! More! More! I demand more!! ^o^

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