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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And if Ranma et\'al are as close as I think they are, then, ooh, irony! And as for Ryoga and Ukyo, I think I can guess what sort of nughty hypnotic suggestion Ranma has in mind, hehhehheh...
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. Quite interesting plot around the neko-ken. Akane is getting a taste of what Ranma\'s been dealing with for years, and that\'s cool. Maybe she\'ll learn to be a little more open and honest with Ranma in this story. :)
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I´m going crazy, becouse i don´t know, what Akane wants to tell Ranma. I hope they will be together soon. =)
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...whats gonna happen?pleeaasee update soon!!thanks
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, let\'s just hope Shampoo doesn\'t sell her soul to gain her vengeance. Course, the rate things are currently going, that may be almost unavoidable at the moment... And will Akane ever tell Ranma what they did in Neko-state? Will they ever have full on SEX?!?!?! Here\'s hoping!! TTFN!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, let\'s just hope Shampoo doesn\'t sell her soul to gain her vengeance. Course, the rate things are currently going, that may be almost unavoidable at the moment... And will Akane ever tell Ranma what they did in Neko-state? Will they ever have full on SEX?!?!?! Here\'s hoping!! TTFN!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, let\'s just hope Shampoo doesn\'t sell her soul to gain her vengeance. Course, the rate things are currently going, that may be almost unavoidable at the moment... And will Akane ever tell Ranma what they did in Neko-state? Will they ever have full on SEX?!?!?! Here\'s hoping!! TTFN!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated! I\'ve been waiting for the update to this story and I can\'t wait until the NEXT update!
On another note, I would like to point out a couple of spelling errors, if that\'s okay. On the fourth from last paragraph at the end of the chapter: The painful twist in his gut told him that his beloved was doing something that would be five times worst than Ranma\'s death.
I think the correct way would be \'something five times worse\'.
There were also a couple instances where you used the word \'where\' when it is supposed to be \'were\'. Though I can\'t find them at the moment @-@;
I\'m probably being very picky, but there are hardly any errors I spotted at all other than those, that I can remember. Again, I can\'t wait for the next update!
On another note, I would like to point out a couple of spelling errors, if that\'s okay. On the fourth from last paragraph at the end of the chapter: The painful twist in his gut told him that his beloved was doing something that would be five times worst than Ranma\'s death.
I think the correct way would be \'something five times worse\'.
There were also a couple instances where you used the word \'where\' when it is supposed to be \'were\'. Though I can\'t find them at the moment @-@;
I\'m probably being very picky, but there are hardly any errors I spotted at all other than those, that I can remember. Again, I can\'t wait for the next update!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wqwq what a ggreat story i could not stop reading please update soon
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, just some guy here. good story, lil ooc in places, but not bad. anyway, a few points i thought id make you aware of:
1) birth control pills? they actually prevent a girl from ovulating, that\'s how they keep ya from gettin pregnant (dont ask me how i know this, im just a trivia nut), that\'s why they have that lil ring of sugar pills in the middle of the pack, so a girl can have a normal period once a month and to give her system a break, etc, etc. just a little plothole for you to fill, there
2) you might want to get someone to read over your stories, or at the very least, read them aloud to yourself so you can see where things mess up(good substitutle for a beta reader), i\'d also reccomend reading them again after you post them on aff.n, cuz they look like your comp threw up, and...yeah... (this is a problem a lot of your fics have, btw, no offense, just letting you know)
3)uhhhh....actually....that\'s all i can think of for now ^^;;; hehehe.... so, just keep up the good work and look into those things, huh?
Keep writing!! /|^_^|\\
SPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1) birth control pills? they actually prevent a girl from ovulating, that\'s how they keep ya from gettin pregnant (dont ask me how i know this, im just a trivia nut), that\'s why they have that lil ring of sugar pills in the middle of the pack, so a girl can have a normal period once a month and to give her system a break, etc, etc. just a little plothole for you to fill, there
2) you might want to get someone to read over your stories, or at the very least, read them aloud to yourself so you can see where things mess up(good substitutle for a beta reader), i\'d also reccomend reading them again after you post them on aff.n, cuz they look like your comp threw up, and...yeah... (this is a problem a lot of your fics have, btw, no offense, just letting you know)
3)uhhhh....actually....that\'s all i can think of for now ^^;;; hehehe.... so, just keep up the good work and look into those things, huh?
Keep writing!! /|^_^|\\
SPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!