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for Shuichi\'s Bored Writings

by rlageorge001

person DBZVelena
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really should update, and a more detailed version of the wedding would be a good start!
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Hey so how did Shu\'s dad behave at the wedding? And what\'s happening with Mika now? Does Ryu and Tat get together? Eep! K and Sakano? Wait what happened to Judy and his son michael? Heh, or his friend Ark? Hm...a tipsy Tohma is a flirtty Tohma? Does that mean if he\'d been sitting by Shuichi he\'d have tried to put the moves on him? *ROTFL* Anyway, I like this, I hope you continue soon
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So how does yuki feel about Shu\'s father\'s attitude toward Shuichi? Or for that matter (if he atcually read Shu\'s journal) Shu\'s self image about being deformed? I\'d forgotten to ask in the last entry sorry *LOL* ^.^V
person PIKACHU GODDESS
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!! What happened to the rest of the story!?!?! It was going so great until the last chapter, and then....NOTHING! I LOVE all the fighting, and even if makes some of the characters are OOC, it also makes the story HILARIOUS!!! MORE, MORE!!!

PIKACHU GODDESS
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person PIKACHU GODDESS
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how it rambles, just like how I imagine that Shuichi would if he had a laptop! I expecially like how heexplains how he feels about Tohma-san, and how he was born \"deformed.\"

PIKACHU GODDESS
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person Yumi
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I love your fanfic so far! =3 You\'re a talented writer.
person Edward
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...That\'s it?! Y-You can\'t just end it like that! I think I\'m about to cry...I can\'t belive I didn\'t read this sooner. I though it\'d be bad, but it was amazing! Please update soon-I\'m dying to know what\'s going to happen. I even stayed up late on a school night so I could finish. (I\'m sure going to regret THAT in the morning...) But it was compleatly worth it. I love this story so much... Please update soon...I\'ll love you forever if you do... ;.;
person neko-chan
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE KEEP WRITING YOU EVIL PERSON YOU !!!!!!! cutting it of there your so mean !HURRY UP PLEASE ITS SUCGOODGOOD STORY!!!
person sabbie
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to let ya know I LOVE Gravitation its one of my fav Anime although it is Yaoi i really don't give a rat ass about that IM A YAOI NUT ANY WAY Mwuahahahahaha heh but any who back to my reveiw yea there are typos but hell that shit happens when ya don't got word and spell check i know what its like with that heh any way love the fic becuase I LOVE Gravitation AND YAOI ITS SELF heh well im going to stop now because if i don't i might start to ramble on about my Yaoi obession with sad but true is over obession from time time but hell do ya blame me if a good Yaoi i read it or buy the dvd to hell with ppl and what the say I LOVE YAOI DAMN IT >< NO ONE BETTER TAKE IT FROM ME I LOVE MY YAOIISH WAYS FOR I AM A BI GIRL MY SELF so i like both the joys of men and women and i did with a man and came close to it with a woman and i know thats stuff not to be shared BUT HELL WITH PPL AND WHAT THE SAY OF ME I LOVE BEING BI ITS THE WAY I AM AND I WON'T CHANGE IT FOR NO ONE NOT EVEN MY DAMN OWN MUM DO YA HERE "NO ONE"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok im done now lol KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK hope to see more lemons come from it hehe Ciao later Je ne AtemSabbieQueenOfEgypt
person Ezj
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AGGGHGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH... realy good storie this^^
It's is an so unusual plot and it's really refreshing to read it.
Waiting for more^^

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