rate_review Reviews

This is so cute! You MUST make a sequel!

interesting. very interesting! *insert evil, psychotic laugh* seriously that pervert had it coming to him! *IEPL* are you going to make a sequel to this story?

wow. that was a very interesting story. not only did you have some nice lemons, but you made a plot and a suitable ending. i am impressed. you story was great, but i wanted to ask you. is english your first language? i noticed a couple of misspelled words, like \"shi\" was supposed to be \"she\", and \"hir\" should be \"hir\". but besides a few words, i cannot find anything to improve upon. i really liked that last lemon threesome. not only was it arousing, it changed the outlook of your story. instead of an \"i\'m horny let\'s have sex\", it puts almost a loving relationship. i have honestly never seen anything like this. congratulations.

Wow. This was AMAZING. Yea, I\'m sick, but I have a fetish for Mew mating. >> Hehehe. :D And this is just wonderful. Especially the births. I\'d love to read more, if there was any. xD *huggles all of the babies*

Oh, and a question...Do you roleplay? xD Would you happen to want to Roleplay with me? I\'d enjoy it. If you can write as good as this, I\'m sure you can. *nods* It would be fun. ^_^