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March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will continue this story its a great start
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great series, I have enjoyed reading both of them so far and I hope you plan on finishing it leteletely. te ite it when writers don\'t continue good stories.
It is interesting the way you have made the charecters act. Mewtwo especially...who knew lol.
The plot and backstories are all great and it is quiet interesting. Makes you wonder what you are going to do next.
Keep up the great story and I hope you do finish it.
It is interesting the way you have made the charecters act. Mewtwo especially...who knew lol.
The plot and backstories are all great and it is quiet interesting. Makes you wonder what you are going to do next.
Keep up the great story and I hope you do finish it.
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really have yed yed this series
When most people use that POV switch kind of technique, it becomes hard not to be repetitive. You are a very good writer. You definately are not repetitive.
You give your characters life.
There may be a few errors here and there. Touching it up wouldn\'t hurt, but they in no way detract from your story.
Wonderful. Keep up the good . ^_. ^_^
When most people use that POV switch kind of technique, it becomes hard not to be repetitive. You are a very good writer. You definately are not repetitive.
You give your characters life.
There may be a few errors here and there. Touching it up wouldn\'t hurt, but they in no way detract from your story.
Wonderful. Keep up the good . ^_. ^_^