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person Eysia (Ellie)
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thia ia really good so far! It's a shame that you never continued it, though. :(
You really should think about it, at least! :)
I only just started watching this again, and I never saw the ending, so I'm excited. :)
It's just missing yaoi, though, hence my serfing. Lol. :)
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I beg to differ, you should totally carry this on! I just love Amidamaru and have been dying to read something with him in it for ages... please write more!! Maybe you could do a flashback with him and Mosuke too... *big eyes* ^_^
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i wish you would continue this ^__^.....its sweet......
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... the first Amidamaru fic i've seen here so far and it's cute! Write more please! ^^
person HieisPetDragon
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I think it's cute. ^-^
Yoh definitely is a straightforward kid... *sweatdrop*
person marie
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey would u please finish the story i really would like to read it and hope that it is as good as this part
person yamiskoi
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh gawds Girl. You have talent. Please... I suck at writing stories. You, however, are brilliant. People just have small minds out there and don't review often on adultfan... And fanfiction.net, well... What can you expect. I loved this. Yoh x Amidamaru are an amazing couple, and you've written this amazingly. Please... Could you email me and let you know if you will continue with this please? Onegai?

X Tsumi Amethyst X
person freaky Feline
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww you\'re letting it hanging like that, it was getting so much interesting damn you\'ve gotta continue this fanfict, it has a good and orginal idea. You\'ve GOTTA UPDATE
person Yoh
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Plaese continue!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I loves me some Amidamaru... ^_^
Your skill is very promising, that it is.

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