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by TheDead

person Kayu Silver
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, how sweet. I can't beleive no-one reveiwed it before. I'm definately recommending it to some of my friends. Maybe they'll reveiw too. ANyway, that was horribly sweet, and to my knowledge there were no glaringly evil mistakes. Did I mention it was too cute?
^_~
Kayu
person Sephykoi
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHH!
I wanna see what happens next~~~~~~~~ *drool* Heehee...
That's just me though, and no, there's not glaring mistakes that I could find--quite well done, I say ^_______^

Another chapter or two is what I (personally) wanna see...but then you don't gotta do it if ya dun have to >:P

~Sephykoi
person tezuka
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god .... i love the beginnign of this story keep writing keep writing i want to know what happens i'll keep on looking at this until you write some more i cant what. oh good job love the story as you can tell. keep it up. finish it please ^_^
person Owl
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story but is that where it ends? Ah well. You're good at writing, never doubt yourself

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