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i LOVED this story! it was GREAT! you have potential and you write very well! keep it up! cheers!

I have to say, I absolutely love your writing! FAKE is a big fav of mine and when I came across this fic it just blew my breath away. I loved it so much that I stopped within the first 3 chapters to scour the net before I figured out where it was in full on your site. ^_^ I never waited long enough for the FAKE pic to load, and there aren\'t any captions for it, so I thought it lost.

When I found it though...oh boy. I think I\'ve read it three times in one week. It makes me so sad though with how it ended and you absolutely MUST continue with Loyalty! It\'s been far too long without an update to this. When and if you do decide to go further ( there are TOO many loose ends, you must! ) you will definitely have me jumping at your heals (per se ^_^). Please do!

Until then, I\'ve found the Yami no Matsuei series you\'re doing and am trying to catch myself up on what you have going there. I adore Tatsumi/Watari and think it absolutely brilliant how you portrayed them. I think I\'m a bit out of order though, so I may venture to your site again to find out the order. ^_^ Keep it up! You\'re work is great!

Xia

Woww! That was amazing! Cannot sit still until the next installment! Loved this ficcie!!!

I'm glad things are getting better for Dee. I wonder why they can't find any other shaman or shaman pairs to help Dee and Ryo. Hurry with the next chapter!!

Hahaha... I've very much enjoyed reading your y any and finding out all the ups and downs it's been taking. Nice writing job. You continue to put the chapters up and I'll be here or there to read it.

Extremely well-written and absolutely fascinating. Please write more, and soon!

I really don't blame Dee. I wouldn't let my guard down around Rose either, even if he is my brother. Hurry with the next chapter!!!

Gahhh!!! Where is the rest??? I just sat here and read the entire story, and let me tell you, there had better be more! Just when I was really not bothered by the whole alternate reality stuff, and was warming up to it all, the thing cuts off! It's like pacing yourself for a marathon and then being told the race is over after hitting the first refreshment station! That's cruel and unusual, my friend. Other tha that, I LOVED IT! And I want you to feel special, because I have read a hell of a lot of fanfics, and this is the first I've ever liked enough to comment on! Go! Go now, and write more!

What a cliffhanger! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh no!! What happened to Dee?! I hope he's okay!! Hurry with the next chapter!!