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Great chapter. This one had a really good twist in it and added a lot to this story. Your detailing was also goos and this plot so far has kept me interested. I can\'t wait to see you update the next chapter soon.

Ok... This was written well... Interesting questions and a nosey Barclay. So you left me with questions of what he\'s coming up with....

What did Rose find? Hurry with the next chapter!!

Its nice for Ryo to have someone to talk to, but I don\'t like this at all. Hurry with the next chapter!!

Great story, although I was expecting Dee\'s powers to have been explained that they were dormant all that time and it was the fact that it was the threat and fear of Ryo being hurt or tor the fear of losing him that \'tried\'ed\' his transformation. You had mentioned in the story before thatwas was known to them before and that no one even had a clue about him. But anyway... still a good story that I really like, I hope that you do have Vin and Buck visiting Ryo and Dee sometime. I liked them. I still think Dee will zap Barclay, even if just a warning that Ryo\'s his. I will be waiting for more....

sorry I meant that he was unknown to \'them\' the other paranormals before, not known. And when I said the fear of losing him, I meant of a more tragic circumstance. Because having been with him for two years and his powers hadn\'t activated - so to speak - I feel that it was because his fear before wasn\'t a mortal loss. Yeah... I can get into the y...y....

I don\'t think that was a good idea. Hurry with the next chapter!!

Once again, I\'m enjoying this story so much. I think you\'re doing wonderful so far.

Wow!! Cool! This story is so awesome!! Hurry with the next chapter!!

I really, really like this story. I think it\'s so cool!