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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really getting into this story. Really interesting.... Glad I checked it out....
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far I can not wait till the next update... Wonder what will happen when Dee wakes up??
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so good. I hope you update really soon. =D
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good one! I like it! I\'m glad that you have Dee being the one with the powers. It seems more fitting. When I first started reading it I thought it might be Ryo with the secret power, but he was just an Ally. (Oh, yeah, like \'just\' *smirk*), then I thought no their just going to team up and deal with \'supernatural\', but I could see the power coming out in Dee. I think you got that on the nailhead that Ryo is his everything.
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Yes, Dee!!! From \'that\'s not true\' to being one! I\'m glad that you chose Dee to be different in this story, he\'s more likely to switch into something else to protect Ryo. Very believable there. Liked how there was some action about io. o. I must of missed something. I\'m going to have to go back and re-read it, but it surprised me about Barclay. Nothing bad about it, just brows raised in interest. So write more soon!
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What the hell just happened? Dee has powers?! How?! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is getting very interesting indeed. I hope you update real s as as I\'m dying to find out what\'s going on. lol.
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so happy that Dee accepted the truth and that he and Ryo are together!!
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O.... Okay.... nice... interesting still.... Now, just keep writing more.
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, are you mean or what? Ending it there?! Geez! Ok, so maybe I should be grateful that you suddenly put up two chapters today, but... holy cow! Ending it there was like anti-climatic! (or however you spell it). I don\'t really read cross-overs... but I do enjoy this one because your cross-over characters actually \'help\' out the main characters. I like that. I don\'t know anything about those other characters or the series their in, but I do like how you have them in this story. I think you pulled off the \'frightened\' part of Dee and the \'sleeplessness\' of both very well. I don\'t know if you intend on getting into any real story stuff about paranormals with these two or not, but I don\'t care. I\'ve liked what I read so far. Please do write more....