rate_review Reviews

I\'m a bit into paranormal stuff so this interested me to see what you\'d do. I like your character cross-overs, even though I know nothing about them, but I do like what part you have them as in this story. I couldn\'t see Dee rejecting Ryo...oops, sorry, guess I wrote about that..heh heh... yet still... it was like \"DEE! You can\'t leave him for that!\" I like that Buck came back in to help out too and \'showed\' Dee that it was true after all. I very much got into the scenes of them together, and you just had to end it where you did, didn\'t you?! I hope that you have more with Vin/Buck, Ryo/Dee doing work together. Like to see some of your interesting ideas with this. Oh... ay voy vote on the Bikky character too.

Well, that didn\'t go well. I hope Dee believes Ryo and accepts him and his love. Hurry with the next chapter!!

Ryo should tell Dee. I believe Dee is very open-minded and won\'t dismiss what Ryo has to tell him. Hurry with the next chapter!!

Ok, interesting. It made me want to read further into the story when you do update again. Your writting is pretty good, but sometimes the indentation or lack of it made it a bit harder to read. I know that when someone puts a story on a site sometimes settings gets changed. Not your fault. It\'s just my eyes go buggy when things are more compressed. I think the story is fantasic though. I like to read stories for the merit of the story itself. Just because there\'s something different or doesn\'t quite go with the line of manga doesn\'t make it a bad fic to me. I did enjoy your conversational comments among them, and the little interlude between Ryo and Dee... wish THAT had been in the manga! Ok, just write more.....