rate_review Reviews

Well, I like it. I'd like to see it continue, see how their relationship works out.
And, by the way, the spell check was giving you crap because it's supposed to say predatory or predatorily. And there are a few errors, mostly towards the end.
But I WOULD like to know... How is Sabel supposed to get over his "childish" side when Fedelta spoiled him by visiting every day, and how would Shydeman react to being dumped by Fedelta? *hamster wheels spin*

Ohhh! you should write more I really liked it. It was sad ending but still really good. Go on and write more!

Uh, I actually think it doesn\'t need to be continued, I think it\'s great the way it is. Angst, Angst! haha. Good Job.

awww....that's so sad. **glomps saable-sama** you can't just leave it like this. i'm not exactly an optimistic person, but i prefer happy endings to angsty ones. plus, poor saable is so depressed. can't you fix that?

i agree with ma twin. you really need to either continue this or to write a sequel. poor saable-chan!

Aw, poor Sabel. I really think you need a sequel to this, just so Sabel doesn\'t have to be so alone. But anyways, it was really good and I hope you wrote another one like it soon.