rate_review Reviews

woot! despite how it needs to be edited a little i love it and dude i want more. ^^

please update! it\'s so sad how Toboe feels about Tsume and how Tsume just seems confused! update soon ^_^

more chapters? If you need a beta reader lemme know, I'd be happy to red for you.

i really hope you make another story this one was awsome!!!!!!! ~^_^~

Nice that was fun. If you feel up to it I think a follow up chapter would be cool.
lo

This is a work of art. I keep checking everyday to see if you have ch. 2 up yet. Please, continue on with the story. Don't worry if Tsume gets out of character, I've read fics where the meanest of characters in a series become the most passoniate and understanding ones in a fic, and almost all of them rock!!!!! So don't worry, Tsume gets a bit OOC in the series and it makes him even more complicate und understand. Just let your gut tell you what your characters would really do in that type of situation or give your fic some variety and make them unpredictable. Either way, this fic is a great one and I can't wait until the other ch.s are out. Please email me and let me know. Happy typin'!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Kaiyon

Well...I have to write...that you did a wonderfull work in keeping up Tsume's act...he is a difficult character to write you managed to do that awesomely good! ((oh...what a wonderful english grammar and spelling we're using here in this review *chuckle*)).

Anyway. I have no constructive critisism to give you, since I can't find anything in my opinion, wrong with the story.
And...one gotta love Toboe and Kiba! ;)

right? *glares at anyone that says otherwise* ;)

*whimper*whimper* WHYYYYYY?! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?! Poor Toboe...all he wanted was some wolfy love from the ever aloof Tsume....Why does Tsume have to be such a prick?! Sexy..but a prick! I love your story because it is SO angsty, and a loverly make-out session!! ^_^ Good times!! So what happens next?! WHAT ABOUT TOBOE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Bonjour! Wow, I absolutely love this fic, and do hope for a continued chapter, asap. Have fun writing it ~Au Revoir~

i love this story! Please, write more on it!