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It was fine I like it hurry and write more

KEEP GOING! PLEASE~!!!!

AWW! I love it its so adorable!!!! Sad ;; But truely adorable! I really love your style and I think you kept Tsume in character very well, Im the one with Oocness >< Check Toxic Minds to see what I mean -.-...anyway! You gatta write more!! I wnot sleep tonight for worry of Toboe out there....in the cold...........T_T TOBY-CHAN!! *goes to save Toboe*
Kaga~o.o Shes ganna get herself ki-
Naraku~SHHH!!! *pushes his head down*DONT SAY ANYTHING!!!. She\'ll be fine!!! ^.^
Ren~Eh...yea.....

AWW! I love it its so adorable!!!! Sad ;; But truely adorable! I really love your style and I think you kept Tsume in character very well, Im the one with Oocness -.- Check on Toxic Minds to see what I mean....I think the only thing that bothers me is, ITS UNFINISHED! WAH! I wont sleep tonight for worry about Toboe out, in the cold....alone O_O....TOBY-CHAN NOOO!!!! *runs of sav save Toboe*
Kaga~O.o shes ganna get herself killed
Naraku~Isnt it delightful ^____^
Ren~Oh the both of you are GREAT...bitch bitch bitch but do either of you DO anything???!!! NO!!! You\'re both so...O.o;;
Everyone~O.O.....
Ren~...uh....

No, Tsume seemed pretty in character to me, so good job with that. It\'s a good start, sounds like it\'ll be a cute fic! Keep up the good work!

Tsume x Toboe is definitely my fave pairing, though I usually miss the time it airs at so I definitely dont know enough about the charas to critique this or write a fic myself. I liked it though. For some reason, I found it really amusing in addition to cute and fluffy, which is definitely good. I so needed a feel good fic to make me smile. ^^ I would like more of it even more, so please go on!

I\'m interested to see how this turns out. I hope you put up the next part soon.