rate_review Reviews

oh gods...so hot....

that was great. I loved it. you should try to get the spacing thing fixed, but other than that it was great.

I didn\'t really enjoy the three some you wrote, it had potential but I just can\'t get into dialogue like that. There was a little less of it here and it let the rest of your story shine through and I absolutely loved it. ^-^ Keep writing.

Gin: Well, I can't say anything bad about this fic.
Zap: I can!
Jin: Nobody asked you. *throws Zap out the window*
Risika: You do know we're on the 3rd floor, right?
Jin: Oops.
Gin: Don't worry about it. Knowing her she'll come back to life by tomorrow. Anyway, nice fic! This is my fav pairing, so if I could give you something, I would! But I can't write worth shit and my drawing skills suck, so I'll just give you nice reviews.
Risika: And Casakiten cust ust f*** off. So they were a little OOC, so what? In the show they're straight (we think ^_^) so they almost have to be ooc for this kind of fic.
Jin: So basically, don't listen to Casakiten. "Why?" you ask? 'Cause that person doesn't know good writing.
Risika: Obviously. So from all of us, to you-
All: Happy writings!

Haha! Hmm...wcan can I say about this fic?
That it was fu***** awesome! LOL, can't wait to read your other fics.

Eurch. Wellllll, the main characters were EXTREEEEMEELLLYY out of character. Setting aside the fact that being together is out of character, the dialogue, the actions...that did NOT help. Work on relating better to the characters. Cause this was bad.

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYA i have been looking for a fanfic on this pair forever there so good together but knowbody makes a fanfic for this pair thanks a bunch it was really good ^-^