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for A Moment In Time

by BunnyBreath

person Yolanda
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG they're finally hooking up YAY lol, well this story's great! hope u update soon and have more Spike&Faye moments ^_^ Jet dead???? O drama!! lol
person Fingo Fate of the Past
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is amazing. You really have a true gift for getting inside the mind of the characters of Cowboy Bebop. Usually I avoid Bebop fics like the plague because they usually screw them up but you're doing a great job. Except for a few minor discrepencies i.e. the fact that Spike healed so damn quick, the fact Faye was not unconscious after being shot (no matter how many nanobots she's got), and some other very little nit picky details that I should just get over, this fic really is one of the best I've ever read. It's not overly lemony, I love how you incorporate the music into it which is a core theme of Bebop, and how you describe the ethereal visions Spike is always having of Julia. It's just... wow. That good. I've stayed up WAY too late these past two nights trying to get through it. Keep up the good work, and props for staying true to the characters, unlike so many other writers on this site. Peace, Love, and Bebop, Fingo Fate of the Past
person onlyindreams
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES! Electra is OUTTA here!!!
person JAMES
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O Electra left??? Wow, what a SLUT!!!! hahahaha Well, now that she's gone, Spike, the big 'ol playa, will go try to hit another homerun (with Faye)!!! XD
person Candy Perversion
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg, dude, I LOVE you! Ha! XD Electra's gone, and Spike just goes smoochy smoochy to the Faye-Faye! HA! lol Sorry I didn't review right away, but I was grounded, eheh. -_-' YOU ROCK!!!!
person BlueVixen2071
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, wow, WoW! YAAAAY! LoL Yes! The plot DOES thicken...BEAUTIFULLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^___________^ Hey! I'm back from vacation, and you UPDATED!!! How friggin' awesome is THAT?! ::huggles:: It's wonderful! You've improved SO incredibly much that I now feel as if I'm watching an episode! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!! ^,~
person stella
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is really neat...please continue
person James
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chick-a-chick-a-BOOM-BOOOOM!!! XD lol Not bad, considering you weren't in a 'lemony' mood, rotfl. Hahaha, that sounds JUST like Spike....a pretty girl sits down beside him and he...::drum roll:: POUNCES!!!! ::animalistic growls::
person CANDY PeRvErSiOn
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, hahaha, I wrote a whole bunch of songs. Don't ask me how, cuz I seriously don't know, but songs come to me ALL the time. Likndy ndy perversion's pretty NC-17 since I have lines like 'bubble gum blow job pops' & things like t =-P =-P Oh...COPYWRITED!!! lol Great job! Although I would've preferred that Spike got his freak on with a certain vixen, I was relieved to find that he didn't feel right about it. ^_^ And it's good that you weren't in a lemony mood, cuz then it would've been worse! lol That, and this expelled "crappiness" (trust me, it wasn't crap, that's just the best thing I could come up with, lol) has made way for the even BETTER lemon between Spike/Faye! ^________^
person BlueVixen2071
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay! Update! lol Stinky Electra! At least Spikey didn't feel right about it! GO FAYE!!!!!!!!! XD

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