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u never cease to disappoint. thats good. awesome stories you make, very detailed and romantic, the perfect thing for this story.

Dear Hawker,

The "Loss and Redemption" series is one of the top 5 fanfics I have ever read. You have captured the characters' personalities perfectly. I must also praise you for actually using good grammar and spelling in addition to a long, involved and engaging ylinyline with *gasp* PLOT.

You are an exeptional writer and I hope to see you complete the "Loss and Redemption series.


Your New Devoted Fan,

Enviral

can't wait for more,please update as soon as possible
maybe you could put in the scene where she goes into labor

wow thats a lil scary... i JUST got finished ing ing your other story saying biy i cant wait till part two comes out and then i wkaeup the next day and ill be damned but it was there lol. well i am looking forward to this sotry very much and your right alot of people may have used the motoko and keitaro pairing based on the married theme but your in uncharted waters now man so do what ever you think will best suit yourself and the readers of your story. i know ill be reading it thats for sure.



- Ken -

ey i loved da sequel. nd im glad dat u wrote one. nd dunt be afriad, cuz ur like a pionner, in da fanfic world den, ami rite? nd u js started off good. as long as its a kei/motoko fic, i tink its great.

Great story, I loved the original, and am looking forward to you finishing this idea. there is great potential to this line of thought, and has made me rethink my original ideas on the keitaro/motoko pairing, as I have actually been partial to K/Mistumi or K/K

I have been waiting for a sequel since the 1st Loss and Redemption on Fanfiction.net. Chapter 2 will be the next thing I\'ll be waiting for.