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Thanks for finishing this one. It's beautiful. The beginning part is very detail, I love it, but end end is a bit rush - leaving a feeling that it doesn't complete. I can't wait to read your new fic.

Well, I just found that you put up a couple of chapters ahead of me. I just checked last night and it didn't show up, but I found it this morning. Great job on both the chapters! Very tactful and well done on the part zzy.zzy. As for not having a lemon...can kind of figure what happens later after closing the door. The ending was very touching that you had. Enjoyed this fanfic very much all the way through. NOT disappointed! Gave a bit of heart attack there, but you did a really great job in moving it along as quick as you did. I'm saving this in my favorite stories.

Nice little fic you got goin' here. One complaint there's no sign Bikky or the penguin. They're my favorites out of the supporting cast.

I love this! You are going to win the contest. My little crapracular story, should I send it in, isn't even half as good as this one is! Please update soon!

I love this! You are going to win the contest. My little craptacular story, should I send it in, isn't even half as good as this one is! Please update soon!

Hi.

I love it. It's excellent! But you're so cruel, the angst is almost unbearable. Does Ryo really love Lizzy or just pretend to, cos if it is the later, it will lead to an unhappy marriage. My guess is that to make Ryo realize his own feeling on Dee is by making Dee having a way with JJ (or with a certain girl). Please update soon, I can't wait to read more! :)

Hi.

I love it. It's excellent! But you're so cruel, the angst is almost unbearable. Does Ryo really love Lizzy or just pretend to, cos if i the the later, it will lead to an unhaparriarriage. My guess is that to make Ryo realize his own feeling on Dee is by making Dee having a way with JJ (or with a certain girl). Please update soon, I can't wait to read more! :)

Poee. ee. What's he going to do? Hurry with the next chapter!!

Enjoyed your new chapter very much even with the introduction of Lizzy...hate her, of course. Always have to with anyone coming between the two. I liked the all around interactionweenween the two guys, and can see Dee's restraining himself like that. It really is terrible having to put up a front, or smile like that when it's eating you up inside. I really liked your 'past' story between the two, and would like to see some more, but reading the story as you have it, it seems like that would be hard to go back and add anymore detail. I guess it reallyppedpped it up when he left back then. Look forward to reading more chapters.

I like it even better now~ @_@ I just wonder if maybe you can arrange some instances where dee actually has a chance with someone other than ryo. Even if he chooses ryo in the end. Please keep writing!