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I so really like this story! I thought you captured the moment very well. Can\'t wait for next chapter!

Oh please, update this one! I want to read more! It\'s so sweet. Ryo has given his virginity to Dee and he is rightfully belong to the man. They should be united again.

Ryo better have been lying!!!! But so far so good!

engage?????!!!! with who????

Is Ryo really engaged or did he just say that so Dee would leave him alone? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

T_T... can I cry? Those moviad bad better have a happy ending... O_O Still *sniff* it\'s a good job writing... it took me 20 minutes to get to your chapter because the lines were busy... only to nearly get floored when he said I\'m engaged! I don\'t know anything about the movies, but I hope it\'s a fluke (made up), or that they wind up together one way or another.... (coming from an author that tortured people for 13 chapters!) Poor Dee... I think he\'s been waiting around to find Ryo... could be wrond.. could be that he just got dropped in his lap so to speak... I\'ll have to look those shows up... Still look forward to your next chapter...!

I love it! So sad, and so beautiful! I need more! You can\'t just leave it there! No! Anyway. I loved it, and I thought it was really good!

Sorry for not reviewing sooner but update soon!!! Love it!! please update!!! ^o^

My vote! My vote! I really loved what you did with this chapter. I was laughing so much about the tent -- although other people might not understand why I would, but it\'s a personal inside joke people. But it was perfect. And for what you said about the physical and emotional thing was right on the money too. Well, just everything was even down to the horniness of an 18-year old Dee. And again I liked the mentioning of the only way to express himself was physically. There are so many people that believe the ultimate thing to give or do is physical -- I have, but then there\'s people that don\'t, yet they take it anyway and offer little more than we had a good time, but... And I\'m not saying that Ryo\'s this other way. You\'ve got him scared about it all and he \'ran away\'.

Even though one should think look what Ryo\'s gotta being dealing with... that\'s a huge tilt of his world... I\'m shoving Dee to go after him anyway. I hope he does find him, though now I think he\'s going to need to do some battle damage cleanup. I hope Ryo isn\'t too blocked off from him, just in shock... and I say it as if that\'s a good thing.... oh, my sick mind sometimes...

Anyway, I think it\'s been excellent. I don\'t care. I enjoy it. There were some major points in it that I picked up on. I\'m very happy with this second chapter, and look forward to reading your next one!

You did not disappoint! Great job. Loved every bit of this second chapter! There were parts that think you did rather well in the opinion and makeup of your character. *thumbs up* ^_^ Can\'t wait for you to update again!